Travel programs Group 1
The first travel program is Kizkalesi by Neslihan, Hatice and Armagan.
The second travel program is Travel Show by Duygu and Ceylan.
The third travel program is by Neslihan, Mehmet and Gulsah.
Travel programs Group 2
The first travel program is by Esra, Aylin and Yasemin.
The second travel program is Travel Lineby Zehra and Aysegul.
Travel programs Group 3
The first travel program is Young Travellers by Ferda, Fatma and Ustun.
The second travel program is by Hande, Ceyda and Gassun.
The third travel program is by Gulsen, Kubra and Hanife.
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Group 1 video 1 ( Armağan and Hatice): Hi friends, I am the first one to have the honour of writing comments.=) Your video is really good. Your are so relaxed while speaking. This is a good point for your video. You have not many mistakes. Thanks.=)
ReplyDeleteGroup 1 video 2 ( Duygu and Ceylan): You have a really good video friends. You are ,like former group, relaxed while speaking. You have not many mistakes. Your video format is also appropriate for travel program. Good job friends. Thanks.=)
Group 1 video 3 ( Neslihan, Mehmet and Gülşah): Your intonations related to your speech can be better. Nevertheless, you speak in a fluent way. You should be more careful about your pronunciation. Good job friends. Thanks.=) Group 2 video 2 ( Zehra and Ayşegül): Your entrance music is perfect.=) You speak fluently. Zehra is vivid while speaking. This is a really good point. However, Ayşegül could be more active while speaking. You have some pronuciation mistakes. Both of your are natural. Besides, you have a video which is good for travel program. Thanks.=)
Group 3 video 1(Ferda, Fatma and Üstün): You have some pronunciation mistakes such as "mountain, tour, lover, shore, Mediterranean". However, you speak in a fluent way. This
is good for your video. Shortly, you have a good video. Thanks. =)
Group 3 video 2 ( Hande, Ceyda and Gassun): Your voices are not heard exactly at the beginnings. Your video is the second Kızkalesi video. However, it is good to find tourists and talk to them. You are relaxed while speaking. This is a good point. Good job friends. Thanks.=)
Group 3 video 3 (Gülsen, Kübra and Hanife): Your speeches are good. You speak in a fluent way. You should be more careful abput your pronunciation and intonation. Nevertheless, good job friends. Thanks.=)
neslihan, hatice, armagan video; kızkalesi is very great place so yr video is good one.
ReplyDeleteat some parts because of background music i could not hear your voice. you should have
arranged the volume of yr voice up and down. congratula....
duygu and ceylan video; girls yr video is good. watching yr video, we can see lots of places
places in mersin. thx. congrtal...
neslihan mehmet video; speeches should have been more fluent. and
"properties, calcium, carbondioxide" are mispronounced words. ıf you had used a different
style in yr video, it would have been more interesting. you finished your video without
a final sentence. congratula...
zehra, aysegül video; sorry but i don't like the video exactly. ı didnt hear girls' voice.
and the background music is not good you should have chosen a different one which
is suitable for the taravel show. congr...
fatma üstün ferda video; aa ı wanna eat tantuni:) yr video is interesting and good
friends. "constructed, prosperities, mediterranean" are mispronounced words. at some parts you spoke
in unision:) congratula...
hande ceyda gassun video; girls yr video is good one. also speaking with tourists is a nice idea
for travel show.so we trust you:) congratula....
gülsen kübra video; girls your video is good. it's suitable as a tarvel show.
congartl...
Group 1: Neslihan,Hatice,Armağan:Your video is excellent. Background music suits the programme. “castle,tourist,sovereign” are mispronunciated.thanks
ReplyDeleteDuygu,Ceylan: You showed good places:) Your intonaiton is good but you could speak more fluently. “ celebration,mysterious” are pronunciated wrngly. Thanks
Neslihan,Mehmet,Gülşah: Definitions are good. Intonation is correct but your pronunciation could be better.”direction”is mispronunciated. Thanks
Group 2: Zehra,Ayşegül: The voice is too low in some parts to hear and music is too high. Generally you are fine. “ attraction,prolong” are mispronunciated. Thanks
Group 3:Üstün,Ferda,Fatma: If I were a traveler I could not stay in the hotels that u showed:)))) Your intonation is ok. You say “mediterranean” incorrect in every sentence. Thanks
Hande,Ceyda,Gassun:The voice is low so I could not hear most parts. It is generally a good programme. When u are running on the beach you were as if turkish classic films:))) By the way,it is an excellent idea to interview with tourists. “eventually,love”are mispronunciated.thanks
Gülsen,Kübra,Hanife: Intonation is good. “stand up and dance”:)))) worth does not take of it takes to. “especially,mediteranean” are mispronunciated. thanks
For Hatice Nesli and Armağan
ReplyDeleteI couldnt hear their voice clearly cus of wave sounds. The girl with curly hair mispronounces the word ‘ legend’. She says like ‘ leı cınd’hoowever it is pronunced like’\ˈle-jənd\. Instead of ‘bar’ hatice should have used ‘pub’. The word’alcoholic is mispronounced. It must be pronounced like: al-kə-ˈhȯ-lik. The word ‘diversity is also mispronounced. She pronounced it like’ dayversity’ however it must be like’ də-ˈvər-sə-tē. There are a few mistakes in pronunciattion. However, their gestures, voice tone are great and the place that they introduce is marvelous. Good job!
For Duygu and Ceylan.
Idon’tknow their names but the girl with long hair spoke like she memorized all the things she said and there are a few pronunciation mistakes in the video for example: When one oof them said ‘ lets go on walking’, she mispronounced the word ‘walk’ because ‘l’ shouldnt be pronounced. ‘What about checking a bit’ is a wrong use. She should have said ‘what about check it a bit’ .the word delicious is also mispronounced.She pronounced it like delişıs. However the end of video is really good. The music is really soothing. Thx for sharing.
For Neslihan, Mehmet and Gulsah
At the very beginning of video Nesli made a pro. Mistake. The word ‘interesting’. She pronunciated it as it is written and she moves too much that I couldn’t concentrate on what she said. Gülşah’s pronunciation is perfect. Mehmet’s accent was really strange. I could hardly understand what he said. :S the video ended like it is incomplete. Because nobody made a closing speech. Anyway thx for their efforts.
For Zehra and aysegul
I cannot comment on their video, because their voices are reaaaaally low.
For Ustun, Fatma and Ferda
Their intonations are very good. And while they introduce the city, they spoke one by one which made the video much more interesting. Fatma shoul pronounce the letter ‘r’ softer. Ferda mispronounced the word ‘walk’. I have tosay again that in words such as: talk , walk, the letter ‘l’ is not pronounced. They eat tantuni which made the video much more real =) Thx for sharing;)
For Hande ,Ceyda, Gassun
I couldnt hear a word at the beginnig of the video, but in the middle Icould hardly hear their voices. As far as I could hear, their pronunciation and intonations were so good. Icant say much more because of low voice. Short interview with tourist is a great idea. I wish we could hear them I cant say much more. Thx for sharing.
For Gülsen, Kübra and Hanife
The beginning is very good. Gülsen talks about the programme, firstly she introduces the programme which is a positive point. The musics at back ground is nice. They didnT make so many pronunciation mistake. Their intonation is appropriate for a travelprogramme. Cong!!!
Hatice Neslihan aRMAĞan
ReplyDeleteThe sound is not heard because of the wave sounds and wind.the video is generally good bu there are some mispronounced words such as legend alcoholic diversity.
Duygu Ceylan
Generally ı could not fınd any mistakes . you spoke so naturally and fluently . Thanks...
Neslihan Mehmet
Indeed, your video is good enough for travel....
but the words " carbondioxide calcium properties" are wrongly pronounced.
Zehra Aysegül
I could not hear some of the sentences.because the voice too low to hear in some parts of the video.
Hande Ceyda Gassun
My friends, You are perfect. I could not find any mistakes. But there is sound problem.
Gülsen kübra Hanife
Thanks my friends. All of your pronunciation and intonation are really good. Cong !!!
(Armağan and Hatice)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. Background music makes the video more attractive. 'touristic, outdoor, diversity, souvenir' are mispronounced. Thanks.
(Duygu and Ceylan)
Your video is good one. Background music changes according to the place you mentioned, which is a characteristic of travel programs. Thanks.
(Neslihan, Mehmet, Gülşah)
Your video is different from other videos. Pamukkale is good choice. 'calcium, throughout, artificial, attraction' are mispronounced. Thanks.
(Ferda, Fatma, Üstün)
ReplyDeleteYour video is appropriate to the travel programs. You should be more careful about pronunciations. 'mediterranean, region, mountain' are mispronounced. Thanks.
(Gülşen, Kübra, Hanife)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good and suitable for travel programs. Your speeches are good. Thanks.
Grup 1, video 2 (Ceylan and Duygu)
ReplyDeleteHi girls, I liked your video. You spoke naturally. Also , the music is very good. Thanks for your efforts.:)
Grup 1 video 2(Neslihan, gülşah and Mehmet)
Hi friends, your video is very good. I did not notice any pronunciation mistakes. Besides, the visual elements that you used are very nice. I liked the music. Thanks.:)
Grup 2, video 1 (Zehra, Ayşegül)
Hi girls, I liked your entrance music very much.:)Both of you spoke well. However, Ayşegül could be a bit more nature. In some parts, I had difficulty in hearing your voices. Thanks for your efforts.:)
Grup 3, video 1 (Ferda, Fatma and Üstün)
Hi friends, your video is good. You spoke fluently, but you mispronounced some words such as hotel, prosperities, and tour. Thanks for your efforts.:)
Group 3 video 2(Hande, Ceyda and Gassun)
Hi girls, your video is generally good, but I could not hear your voices exactly at the beginning. Maybe, tourists could have spoken less. Thanks:)
Group 3 video 3 (Gülşen, Kübra and Hanife)
Hi girls, your video is good. You spoke in a nature way. Thanks.:)
It is very enjoyable to watch all the travel videos.:)
(Ferda, Üstün, Fatma) Your video is great. YOur speeches are good and they are accordance with the scenes. I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDelete(Hande, ceyda, gassun) Your voices are not heard clearly.. You are lucky to have original tourists:) Meanwhile, are there any young tourists? :))
ReplyDelete(Kübra, Gülsen, Hanife) Your video and your speeches are good.. However, you had better have had views of more different places because you introduce a city not a limited place...
ReplyDelete(group 1 vdeo 1 hatice and armağan)
ReplyDeleteSometimes I cannot hear your voice because of th wave sounds. However, your video is really good. You can speak fluently. Also, you have not many mistakes.
group 1 (Hatice, Armağan,Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteFriends, it is a good video. Not so errors are available. 'Tourist and legend' wrongly pronounced but the word 'castle' is not. You use two pronunciation of the word which are true. your speech is fluent. Good job.
group 2(Dygu and Ceylan)
Firstly girls , it is a good travel programme and suits to its format but there are some pauses which is distracting in some parts of speech. Additionally, you say 'I have tried it before.'Then you say ' I will try it before living in Mersin'. Are you sure about that sentence? Anyway, thanks for your video.
group 3 (Mehmet, Neslihan and Gülşah)
Calcium, carbon dioxide are some mispronounced words. Except that, you could be more natural while speaking.
GROUP 2 (Zehra, Ayşegül)
The video is not available.
Another group(Fatma,Üstün and Ferda)
Friends, good job. Your intonations and speech is rather good and clear.Apart from some mispronunciations there is nothing to say.
Other group (Hanife, Gülsen and Kübra)
Friends a well-organized video. The music is a good point of the video. There are some mispronunciations as 'mediterranean'.Thanks...
group 1
ReplyDelete(neslihan hatice armağan)
Your programme was well organized you prepared well.your pronunciation intonation and gestures are good. 'castle, alcholic and diversity' are wrongly pronounced also in some parts of the video the volume of music is too high..thanks..
(duygu ceylan)
It is good point of your showing us different places of Mersin. the final of the video is ı like the most. generally, your pronunciation is good you tried to speak naturally but deliciousand celebration were wrongly pronounced.
(neslihan mehmet gülşah)
Your programme hasnt intro and final speech also your programme's concept is different but it could be better if you introduced places which you can walk around so it could be more suitable. your pronunciation is generally good but mehmet's pronunciation is really different.. thanks..
group 2
(zehra ayşegül)
Friends, I couldnt hear what you said exactly because of the music also the music is not suitable for travel programme.. thanks..
group 3
(ferda fatma üstün)
Your video is very enjoyful you showed different places of Mersin. you speak in a nature way your pronunciation is generally good you mispronounced 'mediterranean, constructed'
(handa ceyda gassan)
It can be seen you prepared well only problem is voice. ın some parts of the video I couldnt hear you. 'love, eventually' were mispronounced.
thanks friends for your efforts:)))
Armağan,Hatice
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately we chose the same place for travel program:) I liked your video.I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistakes.Good job.Thanks for your effort.
(G 1 Neslihan, Hatice and Armağan)
ReplyDeleteYour video is very good. It is suitable for a travel show. Also, your pronunciation is good. Thanks.
(G 1 Duygu and Ceylan)
The organization of your video is well. Your speeches are clear and the pronunciation is good. Thanks.
(G 1 Neslihan, Mehmet and Gülşah)
Your sentences can be understood clearly. It is a good point of your video. Besides, it is well-organized. Thanks.
(G 2 Zehra and Ayşegül)
ReplyDeleteSome of your sentences cannot be heard clearly because of the music. However, in general, your video is good. Thanks.
(G 3 Ferda, Fatma and Üstün)
ReplyDeleteYour video is really good. It is organized perfectly. Also, your pronunciation is clear. I like your video very much. Thanks.
(G 3 Hande, Ceyda and Gassun)
In fact, your video is perfect. However, your voice cannot be heard clearly. It is well- organized. I like the video so much. Thanks.
Group 1
ReplyDeleteFirst video(Neslihan,Hatice
Their video is good but they pronounced ”castle”, “accomodation”,”opportunity” wrongly.They used good music which make the video better.
Second video(duygu, ceylan)
They pronounced “located” ,”incredible”and “orthodox” wrongly but their pronounciation is good. The using of music is also good.However ,somewhere l could not hear their voices properly.
Third video (Neslihan, gülşah)
The video is good. They make appropriate things for travel video like photos and music.their pronounciation was also very good so l could not catch a big mistake.
Group 2
Second video(Zehra,Ayşegül)
their pronounciastion is well but they pronounced “consist” wrongly.because of the music sometimes l could not understand what they said and l think they should show some more pictures from funfair instead, they seemed mostly on the video.
Group 3
Second video(hande,Ceyda)
The video seem to be good but l could not hear what they say properly because the volume was too low so l could not say anything about pronounciation. However, they used music sounds which is appropraite to travel videos .
Thir video(gülsen, Kübra)
Their pronounciation is generally good but they pronounced “wonderful” and “demonstration” wrongly. However, it is a good video for travel.
armağan and hatice
ReplyDeleteyour video is good. both of you speak well. but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as diversity and legend. thanks
mehmet neslihan gülşah
ReplyDeleteyour video is good. ın addition, photographs and music make the video enjoyable. ı didnt notice any striking pronunciation mistakes. but your intonation could be more better. thanks.
duygu and ceylan
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good you speak naturally and you dont seem to memorize your speeches.And you show many places and mention about many things related to mersin. furthermore, the end of the vide is amazing. ı liked the video. thanks
ayşegül and zehra
ReplyDeletealthough ı could not hear your voices clearly in some parts of the video , you speak fluently. and your video is different from other videos in terms of the topic. it was a good and well-prepared video. ın addition, the music is very amusing and suitable for a descrition of amusement park. thanks
ferda fatma üstün
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good. you give a good description of mersin. however, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as "cover", "costruct", "lover", "sandy".thanks
ceyda hande gassun
ReplyDeleteyour video is well-prepared but there is a problem with the voice and the word "love" is mispronounced.ın addition, it is a good idea to talk to tourists. thanks.
kübra hanife gülsen
ReplyDeleteyour video is generally good and it is suitable for a travel video. furthemore, your pronunciation and intonation is good. thanks
Duygu Ceylan
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good.There are few mispronounced words.Music that u used is very suitable for a travel program.You should have used music in the beginning of the video.You should have shown the pictures in the middle of the video not in the end and talked a little about these places.Thanks for your efforts.
Neslihan Mehmet Gülsah
ReplyDeleteI think it is not like a travel program.You should have made introduction and conclusion speech.The word "without" is mispronounced.You should have spoken more naturally.Thanks..
Group 1(by Hatice and Armagan): It was a good video and you were successful friends ;yet, there were some mistakes related to the pronounciation of some words like restaurant, legend,build,and foreign.In addition, there were some grammatical mistakes. “Djs plays” is wrong. Instead of using the verb “takes places”, there should be used the verb “be”,since its meaning is more suitable.
ReplyDeleteThe second video :( Duygu and Ceylan):It was a good video friends.In addition,it was an informative one. However, there were some mistakes related to the pronounciation of some words like “building” and “september”.In addition, there should be used the word “cosmopolian” instead of the word “cosmopolitic” which is incorrect.Ceylan should have paid more attention to the pauses while talking.
ReplyDeleteThe third video :( Neslihan, Mehmet and Gulsah.): It was a good video;yet, there were some mistakes related to pronounciation of some words like “interesting”, “motor”, “formation”,”collect”, “build”, “attraction”,and “damaged”.
ReplyDeleteGroup 2:( The second video by Zehra and Aysegul.)It was a good video;nevertheless, there were some mistakes related to the pronounciation of words like “collect”, “elaborate”, and “interest”. Also, it was a bit problematic due to the sound,for it made understanding a bit difficult. Thanks..
ReplyDeleteGroup 3:( Ferda, Fatma and Ustun): It was a good video; nonetheless, there were some mistakes related to the pronounciation of some words like “hotel”, “history”, “covered”,and “walk”.You made a good effort, friends. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThe second video (Hande, Ceyda and Gassun.) It was a good video even though the volume of the video was a little problematic. I liked your intonations which are good. The word “eventually” is mispronounciated
ReplyDeleteThe third video :( Gulsen, Kubra and Hanife.) It was a good video ,and your intonations were good. Just the word “exhibition” was mispronounced as I heard. You were successful ,friends. Thank you..
ReplyDeletehatice, armağan.
ReplyDeletehi friends,
it was really a good video. it is 100% a travel video. :) there were no noticeable mistakes. thanx...
zehra and ayşegül,
ReplyDeletehi girls,
your video could be better. i could not hear your voice clearly.
ferda, fatma, üstün.
ReplyDeletehi friends, your video was succefull apart from some pronounciation mistakes such as cover and construct. thanx.
hande, ceyda and gassun.
ReplyDeletehi friends,
i liked your video. it was very good. thanx.
neslıhan mehmet gulsah:
ReplyDeletealthough your speech is fast, it is not clear enough. i think you should pay attention to your pronunciation. including that mehmet should speak slower to have a clear speech.
zehra aysegul:
i really cannot make a comment of your speech because it is too hard to hear. the music at the back is too loud.
fatma ferda ustun:
foxs:) your video is one of the good travel program including your speeech every thing is clear. good job:)
hande ceyda gassun:
your video is good but there is a voice problem so that i cannot make comment to your pronunciation. by the way, you are lukcky to have tourist:)
gulsen kubra hanife:
your speech and video is good:) good job girls!!!
duygu ceylan: it is also a good video. i could not hear any clear pronunciation mitake.
armagan, hatice: i could not watch you video because cannot be downloaded
hatice, armağan:
ReplyDeletehi friends, your video was successful( good intonation and pronunciation)I liked it.It was suitable for a travel programme.the place was really beautiful.
zehra and ayşegül:
It is a good travel video in general but I think the music at the back is too loud so I can't hear very well what you say.The pronounciation of words like “collect, and “interest” are wrong.
hande ceyda gassun:
Hi!tourists are really a good idea.I liked it.Your video is a good one except from a few pronunciation errors such as cover and construct.thnx...
fatma ferda ustun:
Hi guys... I really liked your video :)All of your tone of voice is clear thnx for your effort.
neslıhan mehmet gulsah:
It is a good choice Pamukkale.photographs and music make the video enjoyable.thnx anyway...
gulsen kubra hanife:
It was a good video ,and your intonations were good.thnx
Group 1 video 3 ( Neslihan, Mehmet and Gülşah): Everything is nice well-done but u could have done the ending better. Thanks
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 video 2 ( Hande, Ceyda and Gassun):It is very good to shot a part in bus and to go there for programme.However the sound is so little and a bit complex. It is an excellent idea to make reportage with tourists.Thanks
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