History programs Group 1
The first history program is Journey to the History by Ayse, Ipek and Asli.
The second history program is A Page from the History by Burcu, Gulhan and Derya.
The third history program is Latin Italian Catholic Cathedral Church by Ezgi, Gulhanim and Mehmet Can.
History programs Group 2
The first history program is The history of Anitkabir by Murat, Mercan and Selman.
The second history program is by Kasim, Hatice and Nazli.
The third history program is History of Wonders by Jonathan by Ali, Pelin and Ozlem.
History programs Group 3
The first history program is History of Roman by Orhan, Selahattin and Mirac.
The second history program is Pisa by Ceylan, Emine and Muhammet.
The third history program is Great wall of China by Elcin , Zehra and Sevil.
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Group 1 (ayşe,ipek)
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good video. It is apropriate to a history video. Their pronounciation was genereally good. However,they pronounced occur and exhibition wrongly.
Second video (burcu, Gülhan)
They pronounced “museum” and “exhibition” wrongly.I think the question ‘how did you find?’ shouldn’t be asked.ın the end it is a good video for history.
Third video (ezgi,gülhanım)
One them spoke like telling a history and it is really good and appropriate for history video. Then they give impartant dates in detail which maket he video better.
Group 2(murat,mercan)
They pronounced “construction” wrongly.however,generally, it is good job.
Third video(ali,özlem)
I think their pronounciation is generally well but they pronounced “continue” wrongly.Also they should show much about pyramid’s because mostly they showed themselves seemed in the video.ın the end it is a good video.
Group3 (Orhan,Selahattin)
In my opinion the pronounciation is good but they pronounced “foundation” wrongly.however, it is good job friends.
The second video(ceylan, emine)
In fact, the pronounciation is good. Muhammet’s speking like telling a history is good fort his type video but Icouldn’t hear ceylan and emine.
The third video (Zehra, elçin)
Their speaking as telling a history is a good idea.Also they mostly showed the place they are introducing which make the video good. Pronounciation is mostly well.
History group 1(ayşe, ipek, aslı)
ReplyDeleteGirls, it is a good job. There is almost no any mispronunciation.
Second one(burcu,gülhan, derya)
Friends , maybe it would be better to have chosen a different place for your video because there is already one related to Mersin.
Another video (ezgi, gülhanım, mehmet can)
I could not catch any pronunciation mistake,good job..
(ali, pelin, özlem)
In that video, the word ‘because ’ is pronounced wrong. Pelin should not have spoken that much because her speech overhhighes the other ones. Additionally, some unnecessary details are included about the pyramids in the video . Anyway, well done friends:)
Group 3 -1(orhan, selahattin, miraç)
Except from ‘kilometer’, there is no wrongly pronounced word I think.. Well- done friends..
2(emine, ceylan, muhammed)
Friends, I could not hear clearly what do you say but Muhammed can be heard. He speaks in a suitable intonation for a history program.The pronounciation is well, also.
3(elçin, sevil,zehra)
'great' is pronounced wrong. Sevil your speech is impressing. Friends it is a good history program. Congrulations..
Group 1(Ayse, Ipek and Asli.)It was a good video. There were some words related to a historical programme ,such as "bc,excavating, found,empire,restoration",which is a good point for a history programme.There were some words mispronounced such as "history" and "restoration".Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe second video(Burcu, Gulhan and Derya.):It was a good video. you used the words,such as "century,sculpture"etc,which was a good point for a histoy video.Also,it was informative,which makes a good point for your video. The words"history, building,and informative" are mispronounced. Thank you..
ReplyDeleteThe third video(Ezgi, Gulhanim and Mehmet Can):It was a good video.You made an informative video.You used many words related to a history video,such as "ethnics, community, and religion",which is a good point for a history video. Nevertheless, there were some words mispronounced like "education, buid, period, and history". Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGroup 2(Murat, Mercan and Selman.):It was a good video. There were some mispronounced words like"senator, leader,and foreigner".Also, there was a grammatical mistake like "75 of them was".It should be said "75 of them were",which is correct.Mercan and Selman talked too fluently in my opinion.Thank you..
ReplyDeleteThe third video(Ali, Pelin and Ozlem.):It was a good video.It seemed to be an informative one.Instead of telling "on 2000",it should be said "in 2000".In addition, instead of telling "the things that differs from", it ought to be told "t"he things that differ from",which is correct. The words "build,glad,because,and history" are mispronounced.Thank you..
ReplyDeleteGroup 3(Orhan, Selahattin and Mirac.):ıt was a really informative video as well as being the boring one since it lasts too long.The words "originally and conquer" were mispronounced. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe second video(Ceylan, Emine and Muhammet):It was a good video. Some words like "conquer, restart,and build" were pronounced wrongly. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe third video(Elcin , Zehra and Sevil.):It was a good video.The words "history, ancient,and great" were mispronounced as I heard. Thank you..
ReplyDeleteelçin, zehra, sevil Iliked your video but I couldn't hear your voice clearly. As far as I understood there is no pronouncation mistekes. thanks my friends:)
ReplyDeleteceylan, emine, muhammed. I liked your video. pizza and conquer pronounced wrongly. thanks my friends :)
ReplyDeleteAyşe,İpek,Aslı
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good.However, there are some mispronounced words such as eartquake,occur and wonder.In addition,Aslı shouldn't havelooked at the camera while speaking.Thanks.
Burcu,Gulhan,Derya
ReplyDeleteYou should have given more information about the history of building and museum instead of introducing paintings and sculptures.The word 'gallery' is mispronounced.thanks
Ezgi,Gulhanım,Mehmet Can
ReplyDeleteYour video is completely a history video.I liked it. Gülhanım mispronounces the word 'cathedral'.Thanks for your effort.
Murat,Mercan,Selman
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good,but the words 'construction' and 'whole' are mispronounced.Good job.thanks.
ayşe, ipek, aslı
ReplyDeleteyour informative pictures and data are sufficient.you made the transitions well. but ı think your voice tone or intonation could be more serious, without pausing. because it is rather serious in real history programmes.they give the effect of that historical place/event wiyh their voice and intonation. all in all, your video is all right.
derya, gülhan, burcu
ReplyDeleteyou made effort, it can be seen from the place. you did research on the museum. but the speech of gülhan and derya was not natural in my opinion. they spoke by heart. they attempted to tell about many things about the museum but their speech (intonation, pronounciation) was not so effective this time. also you could have used background music.
ezgi, gülhanım, mehmet can
ReplyDeletefriends, it is a succesful video. your vocalization is generally good. it is suitable for a history programme. the word,"sultan" was pronounced incorrectly.
murat, mercan, selman
ReplyDeleteit is a good history video. your speech styles and transitions between speeches- pictures are also good. selman spoke naturally. also mercan was in the position of a real historian. murat's vocalization was also successful but he gave so many numbers and dates:)
pelin, ali, özlem
ReplyDeletepyramids are really interesting!.. the information you gave was important and sufficient. your speech was good. özlem was a bit passive, she should have asked more questions.but generally that s a good video.
orhan, selahattin, miraç
ReplyDeleteyour video could have been better. ı think one of you should have been a presenter. because the programme starts immediately and finishes so. you should have introduced what you would talk about. for example, there is just wall in the first 2.50 minutes. orhan spoke perfectly but he could have stand there by telling. it is a bit boring. however, in general you all spoke in a suitable way to history programmes.
ceylan, emine, muhammet
ReplyDeletea very good history video! mahocan's speech is rather serious and effective. also there are gaps sometimes among his sentences. it is also good.the music and pictures are in a harmony. the experts are also successful and they give the effect of history programmes with their voice and intonation. bur ceylan could have spoken more.
sevil, zehra, elçin
ReplyDeleteyou divided your speech into three parts according to the subjects.also zehra made a conclusion at the end.these are good points. your intonation/ pronounciation are sufficient."calculate" was misproounced.but it is a good video in all.
first video( ayşe, ipek, aslı)
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good. its format is suitable for a history video. there are not many pronunciation mistakes. but the pronunciation of "wonder" is wrong.
(Burcu, Derya, Gülhan)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good and informative. It is a good point that while they are speaking, the museum is shown rather than speakers. Sometimes, I couldn't hear your voice exactly. 'exhibition' is mispronounced. Thanks.
(Ezgi, M.can, Gülhanım)
Your video and its format is suitable for history programme. Your intonation is very good. 'cathedral' and 'period' is mispronounced. Thanks.
(Murat, Mercan, Selman)
ReplyDeleteYour video is informative one. Your speech and intonation are good, but transitions between speakers are not clear. 'fortune' and 'leader' are mispronunced. Thanks.
(Orhan, Selahattin, Miraç)
ReplyDeleteThe video is good, but a bit long. Your format is a bit different. Each of you mentioned about different historical places, but there is no unity. Also, sometimes, you spoke without taking pauses into consideration. Thanks.
Ali,Pelin,Özlem
ReplyDeleteTelling the history of pyramids is a good choice.The word 'focus' is mispronounced.In addition,you used the same additive transition signal one after another.Apart from these,your video is good.thanks.
Orhan,Selahattin,Miraç
ReplyDeleteYour video is too long.you should have spoken slower.Orhan used 'and' and 'in addition' at the same time.In addition,there are some mispronounced words such as restoration and metre.Thanks for your effort.
Ceylan,Emine,Muhammet
ReplyDeleteI liked your video.Muhammet used right intonation while narrating history.I think Ceylan's and Emine's speeches aren't enough.Good job.
Elçin,Zehra,Sevil
ReplyDeleteYour video is a bit long,but not boring.Extention of your speeches is well-balanced.Thanks for your efforts.
(Group 1 Ayşe, İpek and Aslı)
ReplyDeleteYour video is suitable for history programs. It is well-organized. Your sentences are appropriate for this subject. I like the video. Thanks.
(Group 1 Burcu, Gülhan and Derya)
The organization of your video is really good. Your speeches are clear and they can be understood easily. Thanks.
(Group 1 Ezgi, Gülhanım and Mehmet Can)
Your pronunciation is good. Also, tone of your voice is really good. I like the video very much because it is really perfect. Thanks.
(Group 2 Murat, Mercan and Selman)
ReplyDeleteI like the video very much. It is organized perfectly. Also, your speeches are really suitable. Your sentences are clear. Thanks.
(Group 2 Ali, Pelin and Özlem)
In general, your video is perfect. You speak clearly. Your pronunciation is also clear. Thanks.
(Group 3 Orhan, Selahattin and Miraç)
ReplyDeleteIf your video is shorter, it can be better. However, the organization of the video is really perfect. Your sentences are clear. Thanks.
(Group 3 Ceylan, Emine and Muhammet)
I could not hear your sentences clearly. However, in general, the video is really good because the intonation is good. Also, all of you should have spoken equally. Thanks.
(Group 3 Elçin, Zehra and Sevil)
Your video is really well-organized. I like it very much. Your pronunciation is also good. Thanks.
muhammet emine and ceylan; your video is good it has an effective harmony between music and photos.
ReplyDeletegenerally i heard about muhammet' vocalization. the words "conquer, restart" are mispronounced. all in all good congratulat....
orhan mirac selahattin; friends i saw that you expended so much effort but you should have started the video with an introduction speech. it has a sudden beginning. and "perhaps, century, foundation,originally, angle, meter,conqured" are mispronounced words. you vocalized the history equally. that is good . lastly it is good job:)
ReplyDeleteali pelin özlem; firsly i thought that you recorded a daily show. then , i changed this idea you should have indicated more pictures. your speeches are good but "three, theory, because, continue" are mispronounced words. congratul...
ReplyDeletemurat mercan selman; your video is well_organized and photos are charming. "marvelous, accordig to, senator, leader,construct, three " are mispronounced words.
ReplyDeletecongrat....
ezgi gülhanım mehmet; your video is good but i could not understand exactly what you vocalized. your voices are not clear. "secret" is pronounced wrongly. congratula....
ReplyDeleteburcu gülhan derya; you expended much effort friends but you did not exactly explained the history of the museum. you generally showed the pictures etc..you pronounced "combine, thank, museum, history, building" wrongly generally well_organized. congratu...
ReplyDeleteayse ipek aslı; girls your video is good but you did not spoke like a historian. you should have been more serious. you spoke as if you've recorded a daily show. also, "colonies, occur, eartquake" are mispronounced words
ReplyDeletecongra...
All the videos are well-prepared. speakers speak fluently and their pronunciation is good in general... Of course, They are some pronunciation mistakes which other friends have already indicated.. good luck for next videos :) thanks
ReplyDelete(group 2 Murat Mercan Selman)
ReplyDeleteyour travel video is goos of course.
well prepared video, and photo slayt.
You are speaking well. However, ı think you should have used also old photos for Anıtkabir and about the process of its constructure for example.
(group 3 Orhan Selahattin Miraç)
ReplyDeleteYour idea is perfect to record the castle at back of our school. :)
However, I felt a little bit bored while watching.
I know this is a must to prepare this video like this; however, it could be a little short.
Burcu, Gülhan, derya
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good but there are some pronunciatiom miskakes such as “program”..
In addition, your video does not seem like a history video in some parts of the video. Thanks
Özlem, ali, pelin
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good. It is suitable for a history video. Furthermore, they give information about pyramids by using some key words such as build, construct, discover. However, there are some words which are mispronounced like among, because, tomb, period, continue. Thanks..
Emine, ceylan, muhammet
ReplyDeleteThe illusration of “Pisa Tower” is very good. However, there are pronunciation mistakes in some words like conquer, build. In addition, Muhammed speaks much more than emine and ceylan. Thanks..
Gülhanım, ezgi, mehmetcan
ReplyDeleteThe intonation is very very good. However, there are some pronunciation mistakes like build, connect, period. Also, illustration is very successful. I liked this video. Thanks..
Murat, mercan, Selman
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video in terms of intonation, pictures and pronunciation. However, Murat mispronounces the word “leader”. Thanks
(Ayse, Ipek)It was a good video. There were some words mispronounced such as "history" and "restoration".Thanks!!!
ReplyDelete(burcu gülhan derya)
ı think this is a very good video. ı lıked it. good job girls. thanks!!!!1
Özlem, ali, pelin
Your video is generally good. It is suitable for a history video. Furthermore, they give information about pyramids by using some key words such as build. Thanks!!!!
(Orhan, Selahattin and Miraç)
your video is too long. However, the organization of the video is good. Your sentences are clear. Thanks!!!
group 1
ReplyDelete(ayşe ipek aslı)
Your information about the place is good but it could be more informative pictures. your pronunciation is generally good some words are wrongly pronounced 'occur, excavation, recommend'
(burcu gülhan derya)
In your programme you focused mostly on pictures and sculptures. you could give more data about the history of the place. your intonation also could be much better.'gallery, museum, exhibition' were wrongly pronounced.
(ezgi gülhanım mehmet can)
I liked your video it is well organized and ezgi's vocalization is very good. there are some mispronounced words 'community, connect, again, history'
group 2
(murat mercan selman)
You gave important data about Anıtkabir. ıt is good choice.selman spoke so naturally also mercan's and murat's vocalization is good. 'honor, marvellous, construction' were wrongly said words.
(ali pelin özlem)
You shouldn't have started your programme like daily show. you gave beneficial information about pyramid but each of you could give data. özlem didn't speak too much also background music could make the programme better. 'because and history' were wrongly pronounced.
group 3
(orhan selahattin miraç)
Your performance is too long and it has no intro and final speech. you could share the same place to introduce and so it couldn't be too long. your pronunciation is good but intonation could be better. 'originally conquer ' were wrongly said.
(ceylan emine muhammet)
Muho, your voice is very effective really:))your vocalization is good but emine and especially ceylan didn't speak too much. your video is well organized but I couldn't hear exactly emine's and ceylan's what they said.
(elçin zehra sevil)
Your video is well organized you shared your speech seperately. ıt was good but your intonation could be more effective. you mispronounced some words 'construction, calculate, kilometer, collapse, compose'
thanks all friends for your efforts...
Group 1 video 1 Ayşe, İpek and Aslı: You have a good video but you should be more careful in terms of the pronunciations.
ReplyDeleteGroup 1 video 2 Burcu, Gülhan and Derya: I cannot hear your voices due to the echos. However; all of you speak in a good way. Be more careful about intonation and pronunciation.
Group 1 video 3 Ezgi, Gülhanım and Mehmet Can: Some words are mispronunced. Mehmet Can should be more careful about his pronunciation. Except for these, I like your video.
Group 2 video 1 Murat, Mercan and Selman: In general, the video is good. However, there are some grammatical mistakes. You should be more careful about your pronunciation and intonation.
Group 2 video 3 Ali, Pelin and Özlem: Özlem is not so fluent. She makes some pronunciation mistakes such as “focus”. She could be more natural. The others could be more careful about the intonation.
Group 3 video 1 Orhan, Selahattin and Miraç: First of all, your video is too long. There are some pronunciation mistakes such as “perhaps, conquer”.
Group 3 video 2 Ceylan, Emine and Muhammet: The sound is low. I cannot understand what Emine and Ceylan say.
Group 3 video 3 Elçin, Zehra and Sevil: The porunuciation and voice are bad. However, you have a good video in terms of the structure.
Group 1 video 1 ( Ayşe, İpek and Aslı): Your video is good in general. However, you should pay more attention to the pronunciations. Try to be more relax and natural. You have a good job. Thanks.=)
ReplyDeleteGroup 1 video 2 ( Burcu, Derya and Gülhan): You speak in a fluent way. However, there are so may echos which avoids us from hearing you exactly. Nevertheless, you have a good job. Thanks.=)
Group 1 video 3 ( Ezgi, Gülhanım and Mehmet Can): You have a good video in general. However, like the others you should also pay more attention to intonation and pronunciation. Mehmet Can should be more careful about the pronunciations of the words. For example, he mispronounces the word “solution”. Nevertheless, thanks.=)
Group 2 video 1 ( Mercan, Murat and Selman): In fact, the video is good in general. However, you have some grammatical mistakes. For instance, Selman says “ There was forty seven…”. Besides, there are so many numbers. While talking, it is sometimes hard for us to catch them. You could write them on the video to facilitate the understanding. Except for these, you should focus on intonation and pronunciation. Nevertheless, it is a good example of history programme. Thanks.=)
Group 2 video 3( Ali, Pelin and Özlem): You have a good video in general. However, Özlem seems so tense. She could be more natural. All of you have also some pronunciation mistakes. Nevertheless, good job friends.=)
Group 3 video 1 ( Orhan, Selahattin and Miraç): Your video is too long. You have also some pronunciation mistakes. Generally, it is a good vide. Thanks.=)
Group 3 video 2 ( Ceylan, Emine and Muhammed): Generally, it is a good video. However, I cannot hear the voices of Emine and Ceylan. So I cannot make much comment. Thanks.=)
Group 3 video 3 ( Elçin, Zehra and Sevil): In fact, you have a good video. However, you should be more careful about pronunciation and intonation. Thanks.=)
i want to make general comments for this section. all the videos are good and speakers are fluent. only group murat, mercan ve selman put background music which make the video more effective. thanks all my friends for their work:)
ReplyDeleteGroup 1: ayşe,ipek,aslı: friends you are really good.but unfortunately some mispronunciations are unavoidable like earthquake, excavation, mediterrenean thanks
ReplyDeleteBurcu,Gülhan,derya: I like your exhibitions friends:D You must have worked very hard on this video. There are some pronunciation mistakes: galery, floor, about, interesting. Thanks
Ezgi, gülhanım, memetcan: I really like the first girls’ pronunciation and intonation who spoke behind the pictures.Actually all of you are good. Deliver is mispronunciated.Thanks
Group 2: mercan, selam, murat: Your video is very informative. Monunment, construction and foreigner are mispronunciated.
Ali, pelin, özlem: Özlem’s intonation could be better in some parts. I thin she was excited. But generally you are good friends. You gave useful informations actually thank you. Tecnique, theory was mispronunciated.
Group 3: Orhan,Selahattin, miraç: Too long I could not see you but I like the places that u showed us There are pronunciation mistakes: perhaps, moderate, commemorative.thanks
Ceylan,emine, Muhammet: I couldn’t hear emine. Muhammet’s intonation was suitable for history programme.thanks
Elçin,Zehra, Sevil: Your intonations are good friends. But some speeches are not clear enough. There are pronunciation mistakes: authority, guard, great,enlargement, enemy,tower. Thanks
Burcu Gülhan Derya
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but there are some wrong pronounced words such as consideration museum. Except from these they are good at all.
Ezgi gülhanım Mehmetcan
Video is really good. They spoke very good. but the word " communities" is I think wrong. It is very good job.
Murat Selman Mercan
the word "museum, construction" is wrong pronounced ı think. However it is generally good.
Ali Pelin Özlem
They are all spoke well except some mistake. For example the word " focus on, contınue"
Orhan Selahattin miraç
the word " construction" is mispronounced .They gave too much information. The video is too long .Except from these, it is good at all. They spoke so fluently.
Ceylan Emine Muhammet
I t is a good work thanks my friends. Emine's pronunciation really good.so intonation is suitable for the history programme.
Elçin Zehra Sewil
They spoke well except some pronunciation mistakes such as the words history, ancient.
for özlem pelin and ali
ReplyDeleteyour program is suitable for the format of a history program but the compere could speak more fluently. thanks
elçin zehra sevil
apart from the sound which is unclear sometimes,it is a good video. it gives a lot of information.the word ''appear'' is mispronunciated.thanks
for ayşe ipek and aslı
your video's topic is good and the program gives a great deal of historical information.however,it is like an interview.thanks
the first video of first group (ayşe,ipek,aslı):
ReplyDeleteThe historical place is so convenient i think. The direction of the place is so nice. It is good idea to call an archeologist for the programme.
The second video of the first group (Burcu,Gülhan,derya): Ezgi friend's pronunciation is very nice while showing the photos. Well done. You could make a different type instead of presenting the place in order.
ReplyDeleteGülhanım's and Mehmetcan's tone of voice is so little during slide. I wish you get in the cathedral. Thanks.
pardon me the previous one was for the third video of the first group sorry.
ReplyDeleteThe second video of the first group (Burcu,Gülhan,derya): The introduction to the topic programme is so nice. It is very nice place to shoot a video. Furthermore; the plan of the video is so nice. Thanks friends.
ReplyDeleteThe first video of the second group (Murat Selman Mercan): A good point to mention about the competition. The ending could be better. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThe second video of the second group (Ali Pelin Özlem): A good topic for this type. I always wonder about the pyramids. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThe first video of the third group (Orhan Selahattin Miraç): It is a good idea to use that place:). You informed a good story for them:). Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThe second video of the third group (Ceylan Emine Muhammet): It is so hard to understand the video.The voice comes so little.Thanks.
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