Fashion programs Group 1
The first fashion program is by Duygu, Gulsah and Mehmet.
The second fashion program is Nesli and Armi Fashion program by Armagan and Neslihan.
The third fashion program is by Hatice and Ceylan.
Fashion programs Group 2
The first fashion program is Fashion Show in Milan by Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin.
The second fashion program is The Queens Of Fashion by Aysegul and Esra.
Fashion programs Group 3
The first fashion program is Fashion with Diana Tylor by Gassun, Hande and Ceyda.
The second fashion program is by Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma.
The third fashion program is TRENDY DAYS by Ustun, Gassun and Kubra.
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Group 1(duygu, Gülşah)
ReplyDeleteI think the video is good but they could show more about fashion also pronounciation is well.
Third video (Hatice ,ceylan)
The mostly spoke with fashion special words which maket he video good but they pronounced “elegant” wrongly.
Second group(Ayşegül and esra)
The video is very good.pronounciation is good.however, they pronounced “effect” wrongly.
Group 3 (GÜLSEN,HANDE)
The video is very good. Pronounciation is generally good but they pronounced ‘successful ‘,”about”wrongly.
The third video (gassun, üstün)
The video is generally well.pronounciation was good but in a place “creation” and “attract”pronounced wrongly.
Group 1(Duygu, Gülşah and Memet):It was a good video.You used the words related to the fashion such as "jewelerry,watch, earring, flower,skirt,trouser",which is a good point pertinent to a fashion programme. The word "wear" is mispronounced. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe second video(Armagan and Neslihan)It was a good video,friends. You used a number of words related to a fashion programme ,such as "creation, leader, fabric,material, denim",and you used good adjectives for a fashion programme ,such as "sophisticated and elegant",which is a good point for a fashion programme. The words "diversify" and "wear" are mispronounced.Also, there was a grammatical mistake "it will be seem",which is wrong.Both of you paused a bit,yet you prepared well.Thank you..
ReplyDeleteThe third video(Hatice and Ceylan): It was a good video.You used adjectives,such as "elegant,charming" ,and you used words like " high heeled, pattern, accessory, and trend",which is a good point for a fashion programme. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGroup 2(Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin): IT WAS A GOOD VIDEO AS I HEARD,FOR THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH THE NOISE. YOU USED THE WORDS LIKE "FROM HEAD TO SHOE, FABRIC AND "ELEGANT",WHICH IS A GOOD POINT FOR A FASHION PROGRAMME.THANK YOU.
ReplyDeleteThe second video(Aysegul and Esra.):You prepared a good fashion programme. You talked about bags, shoes,dresses,yet you should have shown yourself while talking,which might be better..You made a show,which was also good for a fashion programme. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGroup 3(Diana Tylor by Gassun, Hande and Ceyda):It was a good video.You used an useful part of vocabulary for a fashion programme because you used words like "casual clothes, long scarfs, large dresses, make-up, necklace,and bracelet".Yet, there were some words mispronounces ,such as "wear,successful, and congratulations".Thank you..
ReplyDeleteThe second video(Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma):It was a good video. You used useful vocabulary for a fashion programme.You used words,such as "brand, jean, sport clothes,v-neck t-shirts".The word "wear" is mispronounced. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe third video(Ustun, Gassun and Kubra.)It was a good video. I liked Gassun's gestures and intonation. Kübra and Üstün were also good. The words "style","admit",and "popular" were mispronounced.Also,it should be said "take advantage of" instead of "take advantage from".Thank you.
ReplyDeletegroup 1(Gülşah,Duygu,Memet)
ReplyDeleteA well-prepared video is that. using some words which suit to a fashion programme is a good point but Gülşah coul be a bit more natural.
2(Neslihan, Armağan)
Friends, there are some mispronounced words such as'wear'. Additionally, you use words 'elegant, creation, duffle coats' etc. related to a fashion programme.
3(Hatice,Ceylan)
Girls, congrulations. Your video is so much related to a fashion programme and many fashion words are available in your video.
(Armağan, Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. There are many adjectives defining clothes, which is a good point for fashion programmes. (demanding, artistic, amazing, pragmatic bags:)Very good. 'furthermore, nowadays, spectacular' are mispronounced. Also, you should have spoken equally. Thanks.
duygu gülşah... video; pronunciation is good but this video is seen as if it's a daily show video to me. your word choices are good congratulationsss
ReplyDeletearmağan neslihan video;girls your video is good but neslihan had lot of pauses in her speech and she pronunced "elegant and diverse" wrongly. and "wear" is another mispronounced word.
congrat...
hatice ceylan video is good. they not only spoke but also showed clothes.. this is a good detail for fashion congratu...
zehra aylin yasemin; your video is also good but i could not understand what you said because your voice tone is very very low maybe the problem camera;therefore, i cannot say about pronunciation but you also show the clothes.that is good for fashion congrt....
aysegül and esra your video is also good but "effect" is mispronounced. congratulat...
hande gülsen ferda girls your video is good one. especially gülsen:) it is like a real fashion show yr pronunciation is good but "wear and successfull" are mispronunced wrongly congratulationss
ceyda hanife fatma your video is good you also pronounced "wear" wrongly :)
üstün gassun kübra kübra's speech is very fluent gassun' intonations are good one and also gestures your video is also good.
THX FOR EFFORTS
(Group 1 Duygu, Gülşah and Mehmet)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. It is well- organized. Your pronunciation is also clear. Thanks.
(Group 1 Armağan and Neslihan)
Your speeches are clear. Your pronunciation is also good. The video is well-organized. Thanks.
(Group 1 Hatice and Ceylan)
The video is good. Your speeches can be understood easily. Your pronunciation is also good. Thanks.
(Group 2 Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin)
ReplyDeleteI think, there is a problem about the voice. Therefore, I could not hear your speeches perfectly. However, in general, your video is good. Thanks.
(Group 2 Ayşegül and Esra)
You video is very good. Your pronunciation is clear. Also, the video is well-organized. Thanks.
(Group 3 Gülsen, Hande and Ferda)
ReplyDeleteYour video is perfect. It is very enjoyable. All of you speak naturally. Also, your pronunciation is good. Thanks.
(Group 3 Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma)
Your video is very good. Your pronunciation is also good. You use your gestures. It is a good point of your video. Thanks.
(fashion with diana taylor) your video is good. Gülsen please decide how to pronounce the word "collection" :))
ReplyDelete(ceyda,fatma,hanife) I liked your video very much. content of your video is really good. And the choice of music is great.. good luck..
ReplyDelete(gassun,kübra,üstün) Üstün, I think it isn't right to use "I can have opinion" grammatically. You had better use "may" instead of "can"...Meanwhile, it will be better for you not to look ceiling while thinking what you will say. thanks guys good luck.
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ReplyDelete(duygu gülşah mehmet)
I had dificulty in hearing of your speech there is voice problem. your programme is well prepared but you could use more gestures while speaking and 'wear' was wrongly pronounced.
(neslihan armağan)
In your video there are unnecassary pauses also you could speak with each other so it could be more natural. there are mispronounced words 'wear, proper, fabric, spectacular' but your video is well prepared yuo used suitable words for fasion programme.
(hatice ceylan)
The place you choosed is very suitable for fasion programme but your speech could be more fluently, your pronunciation is good.
group 2
(zehra aylin yasemin)
There is voice problem I couldn't hear what you said exactly...
(ayşegül esra)
You prepared well, your comments about fashion are also good but in some parts of the video you didn't seem . it could be better if you didn't make so also your pronnciation is good. 'combination, popular, categorize' are wrongly pronounced words.
group 3
(hande ferda gülsen)
I like your video friends, you prepared well. your gestures and intonation is good. 'successful and wear' were wrongly said.
(üstün gassun kübra)
I like your video guys gassun's gestures and speech are very good. there are some mispronounced words 'appear, creation, about,popular, attract.'
thanks all friends..
group 1
ReplyDelete(duygu,mehmet,gülşah)
your video is good and you use some words for fashion.thanks...
(armagan,neslihan)
your video and pronounciation are generally good,but you could speak a bit faster.your speeches are monotonous.thanks for your efforts
(hatice,ceylan)
your speeches and pronounciation are good.also you show the clothes and I think that is a good part of your video.
group 2
(zehra,aylin,yasemin)
the voice of your video is not very good so I couldn't hear your speeches.thus,I can't make comment about your speeches:(
(aysegül,esra)
good job.I liked your video very much.your pronounciation and intonation are good.thanks...
group 3
(ceyda,haife,fatma)
girls your video is also very good.your speeches are clear.thanks
(kübra,gassun,üstün)
guys your video is good,your speeches are clear and pronounciation is good.however "style" is mispronounced.thanks...
Duygu,Gulşah,Mehmet
ReplyDeleteThe words "fashion","consideration" and "valuable" are mispronounced. Gülşah shouldn't have looked her paper while speaking.In addition, Mehmet should have spoken lively and he should't shake his foot while speaking.Thanks for your efforts.
Armağan,Neslihan
ReplyDeleteThere are enough fashion-related words in your speeches.You shouldn't have written "The most modish program" in the beginnig of the video.In addition,you should have spoken more naturally.Thanks for your effort.
Hatice,Ceylan
ReplyDeleteI liked your video.A store is a good choice for fashion program."elegant" is mispronounced.Thanks.
Zehra,Aylin,Yasemin
ReplyDeleteI had difficulty in hearing your voice,so I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistakes.You are speaking as if you were presenting news.You should have spoken lively.Thanks.
Ayşegül,Esra
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good,but there are some mispronounced words such as "popular","wonder" and "combination".You shouldn't have said the brand of shoes.thanks for your effort.
(group 3 Gassun Hande ceyda) You are good at fashion girls. :)
ReplyDeleteHande speaks perfect as usual.
Gülsen should have been more cheerful as a famous.
However; unfortunately, your video is very dark. Sometimes, I could not determine some of you.
Gülsen,Hande,Ferda
ReplyDeleteThe organization and music of the video are very good.Your speeches are natural.The words "suprise" and "again" are mispronounced.good job.thanks for your efforts
(group 3 Üstün Gassun Kübra)
ReplyDeleteIt was a good fashion program. Your speeches are good. Just Üstün pronounced stye like 'stil'. He shoul have pronounced it like 'staıyl'.
Gassun,Kübra,Üstün
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good.Your speeches are clear.Kübra said "my habit for me".I think "for me" is unneccessary.In addition,Gassun should have spoken in the end of the program.
group 2 esra and ayşegül
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good. it is suitable for a fashion video and you use related words with fashion. However, pronunciation of the word "popular and continue" is wrong. Thanks friends
esra aysegul
ReplyDeleteYour video is generally good,but there are some mispronounced words such as "popular","wonder" and "combination".thanks!
(armagan,neslihan)
your video and pronounciation are generally good,but you could speak a bit faster.thanks!
(hatice,ceylan)
your speeches and pronounciation are generally good.you show the clothes. so, it is goood!! thanks!
(kübra,gassun,üstün)
your video is good,your speeches are clear and pronounciation is good but "style" is mispronounced.thanks!!!
Group 1 video 1 (Mehmet, Duygu and Gülşah): The image at the beginning is perfect. =) The voice is low. I cannot hear Mehmet exactly. All of you should be more careful about the intonation and pronunciation. Also, you should show the emotions more openly. You could b more vivid and natural while speaking. However, if needed to speak generally, it is a good video. Thanks. =)
ReplyDeleteGroup 1 video 2 (Armağan and Neslihan): You have a good video in general. However, it could be livelier. You could be more vivid while talking. You should also pay attention to intonation and pronunciation. Good job, friends. Thanks. =)
Group 1 video 3 (Ceylan and Hatice): Your video is good generally. However, Hatice could speak more fluently. You are relaxed. That is a good point. Good job, friends. Thanks. =)
Group 2 video 1 (Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin): The voice is not good enough because I cannot hear exactly what you say. You could speak more fluently. Nevertheless, good job friends. Thanks. =)
Group 2 video 2 (Ayşegül and Esra): There is darkness. You should also pay more attention to the intonation and pronunciation. You should show the emotions in a better way. Your clothes including your glasses are exactly fit for you. =) Good video friends. Thanks. =)
Group 3 video 1 (Gassun, Hande and Ceyda): The darkness is a negative thing for your video. You speak in a fluent way. However, you should be more careful about your pronunciations and intonations. Your music choice is perfect. Blue=) Good job friends. Thanks. =)
Group 3 video 2 (Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma): The voices are good and high enough to hear and understand. However, as all of us, you have also some problems in pronunciation. Besides, you have also grammatical mistakes. Nevertheless, good job friends. Thanks. =)
Group 3 video 3 (Üstün, Gassun and Kübra): In general, you have a good video. Kübra and Gassun speak in a fluent way. You should focus on showing emotions according to what you say. Üstün tries to remember what he will talk about. Instead of this, he could try to be more natural. He could say what came to his mind. Nevertheless, good job friends. Thanks. =)
Duygu, Gülşah and Mehmet,
ReplyDeletehi friends,
you videos is well organized. Mehmet could have spoken more naturally, also i could not hear his voice. Gülşah made some pronounciation mistakes.
Ceylan and Hatice,
hi firends, your video is good. However, Ceylan seems very excited.
Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin,
your video is well organized, and i could not catch any noticeable mistakes. thanx.
Ustun, Gassun and Kubra
It was a good video. Kübra and Üstün were also good. The words "style","admit",and "popular" were mispronounced.
duygu gulsah mehmet:duygu mispronounce the word "wear".
ReplyDeletemehmet should be more fluent during his speech. he talks so slow that his speech lose its effectiveness. plus he mispronounce the words "parfum and watch"
neslihan and armagan: neslihan talks as if she memorized her speech. for this reason her speech is not effective.
ReplyDeletehatice, ceylan: it is so obvious that ceylan and hatice memorized thair speech so that their spech is not clear. in addition, trying to remember what to say cause their speech lose its effectiveness.
ReplyDeletezehra, aylin, yasemin: it is hard to hear your sounds in the video. again they memorized their speech and they are having trouble to remember what to say. for this reason, their speech are not clear.
aysegul, fatma: no clear pronunciation mistake:) well done:)
gassun, hande, ceylan: well done girls:)
ceyda, hande, fatma: all the speech are clear:):) good job
ustun gassun kubra: ustun tries to remember what to say. girls speak very fluently. in general it is good.
Group1 video1(Duygu,Gülşah,Mehmet)I couldnt hear exactly mehmet's voice.Except this your scenario is based on turkish ideas.However,you use the words which are related to.fashion.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 video2(Neslihan,Armağan)you used the structures and adjectives which are related to fashion.this was good.However you should be more careful about intonation.
Group1.video3(Hatice,Ceylan)I like your video.You were very natural.you used structures related to fashion.
Group2 video1(Zehra,Aylin,Yasemin)I couldnt hear your voice.
Group2 video2(Ayşegül,Esra)Your video is fun but there are some words which are miss pronounced such as,catogories,classic,generally,popular.
Group3 video1(Gassun,Hande,Ceyda)your video is good.You used a useful part of vocabulary for a fashion programme. Yet, there were some words mispronounced such as successful, really.
Group 3 video 2 ( Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma): I liked your vidoe. You speak fluently. Your music is good.
Group 3 video 3 ( Üstün, Gassun and Kübra): You have a good video. Your speeches and intonations are very good but there are some words mispronounced such as popular, creation and style.
for neslihan and armağan
ReplyDeletethe information you give and the words you choose are good.however youcould talk more lively.and there are too many pauses..thanks
for ceylan and hatice
your program is so funny and nice.also,you use some words related to teh fashion thanks
for gassun üstün kübra
in your program, you should use some visual things because you know it is necessary for a fashion program. there are soem grammatical and pronunciation mistakes: style,opinion..thanks
for ceyda hanife fatma
apart from small pronunciation mistakes, the video is a good one.tahnks friends
for ayşegül and esra
your program is perfect. I watched it with pleasure.you use alot of words related to fashion and your show at the end is great.thanks
group 1: Duygu, Gülşah, Mehmet: Actually I could not hear u beacuse ur voice were low. Generally u are good. Wear and fashion are mispronunciated.tanks: )
ReplyDeleteNesli, Armi: Your intonation are suitable for fashion show. You also spaek clearly. Elegant, scarf, selection are mispronunciated.
Hatice,Ceylan: You could be more fluent friends and more vivid. You pronunciated some words wrongly like elegant and accesory. But generally u are good.Thanks
Group 2: Zehra, Aylin,Yasemin: “From head to shoe” is a good idiom: ) The voice is very low I could not catch every saying. Experience, suit and special are mispronunciated.thanks: )
Ayşegül, Esra:The clothes are really colorful:) Your definitions are very effective. You re modelling good. But u could show urself when defining the clothes. Thorought , ornament, square are mispronunciated.thanks
Group 3: Gülen,Hande,Ferda: You speak fluently friends. But Ferda was a little excited I think. Generally u are good. Speacial,formality,wear and congratulations are mispronunciated.thanks
Fatma,Ceyda,Hanife: Your show is good. You generally speak good. “As fit as a fidlle” is a good definition:) fashion,wear,comfortable,area,speacial and follow are mispronunciated.thanks
Üstün, Gassun,Kübra: You could show visual things. You speak fluent. “Collection like a flower” is a creative sentence:) especially,popular,attractive are mispronunciated.Opinion was said correctly in a sentence but wrongly in another.thanks
Duygu Gülşah Mehmet
ReplyDeletevideo is good but ther is sound problem. speakers spoke fluently also they used words which are used for fashıon.
Armağan Neslihan
video is great for fashıon programme.they used many words for fashıon such as material selectıon fabric.
Hatice Ceylan
video is good they used some words which are related to fashıon. ıt is good point showing clothes while seakıng.
Zehra Aylin Yasemin
I could not hear.There is sound problem. Yasemin seem to speak angirily :)
Ayşegül esra
Video is very good. Pronunciatıon is also good.Thank you...
Gassun Handa CEyda
Thank you your effort.your video is really good you spoke so fluently also during your speeches you used special words for fashıon.thank you again...
1st group Third video (Hatice ,ceylan): I think its a good video but you could have told the fashion by less clothes. They are so much and confusing. Furthermore the video is a bit long. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup 1(Duygu, Gülşah and Memet):It was a different and nice programme. However sometimes the audio effected the real sound you could be careful about it. Furthermore, it was a bit long. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 video2(Neslihan,Armağan): It is a good programme but you could use adjectives more. Thanks for your tryings.
ReplyDeleteGroup 2(Zehra, Aylin and Yasemin): It is different type but its sound quality is so bad :(
ReplyDeleteGroup2 video2(Ayşegül,Esra): It is a good video good type but the visual quality a bit bad.Thanks
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 video1( Gassun, Hande and Ceyda):The video is nice a good fashion programme but i think the camera is not suitable for dark shooting.Thanks
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 video 2 (Ceyda, Hanife and Fatma): The video is suitable for fashion programmes. However you could use more adjectives for the video. Thanks
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 video 3 ( Üstün, Gassun and Kübra):The video is so ordinary I think you could show pictures or video which are related to those clothes like other groups. Thanks
ReplyDeleteduygu mehmet gülşah
ReplyDeletethe video is suitable for fashion. ı think it is well-prepared. but the word "wear" is mispronounced. thanks.