Children Programs Group 1
The first children video is animals by Ceylan, Hatice and Gulsah.
The second children video by Mehmet E. and Armagan.
The third children video is by Neslihan and Duygu.
Children Programs Group 2
The first children video is Happy Children Learning Origami by Aysegul, Aylin and Yasemin.
The second children video is Zehra's and Esra's Color Garden by Zehra and Esra.
Children Programs Group 3
The first children video is Come and Play with BOBO by Gassun, Hanife and Ferda.
The second children video is genius kids by Hande, Fatma and Kubra.
The third children video is kindergarden show by Ceyda, Gulsen and Ustun.
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(üstün, gülsen,ceyda)
ReplyDeletelittle things, you are really lovely. but you didnt speak enough ı think. most of it was the song and game.also gülsen was a bit passive. but ı liked your video kids!
(fatma kübra hande)
ReplyDeleteı hated myself after watching video. ıyyyy::(
(hanifa, ferda, gassun)
ReplyDeleteı will eat the BOBO:) your concept is very nice. also it is a good idea to add an invisible charachter,BOBO. ferda is like a really sad child at first, it is successful but she could have spoken more. gassun's vocalization is perfect.hanife's soft voice tone is also suitable for the programme. good!
(neslihan duygu)
ReplyDeletegirls, your speeches are clear.but ı think your concept is a bit confused. you teach/learn colours. and your game and song could have been related to colours.
(mehmet E, armagan)
ReplyDeleteyour vocalization is very good! also it is enjoyable. but ı think the view could have been better. you could have done it without showing your arms.but all in all good job!
(ceylan, hatice, gülşah)
ReplyDeletefriends, your costume, place and music is so good. your video is successful. but ı couldnt hear what you said very well. the sound of the video is very very bad, but ı know it is not your fault.ıt sounds that you spoke and intonated very well.
Group 1
ReplyDelete(ceylan,hatice,gülşah)
your video is good, but the volume of music is very high.I couldn't hear your voice clearly.however, you look very nice and cute and your speeches are good thanks...
(mehmet and armağan)
friends your video is creative and your vocalization is successful.good job!
Group 2
(neslihan,dygu)
girls your video and song are good.your speeches are also clear and good.thanks...
Group 3
ReplyDelete(kübra,hande,fatma)
girls your video is very successful and educational.your pronounciation is good and your speeches are clear.well done:)
(ceyda,gülsen,üstün)
ceyda and üstün,you act like real children.you are good at acting.your video is very funny,especially ceyda's song.gülsen is successful.good,thanks...
Children program group 1(Gülşah,Hatice)
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good video. They wear animal clothes which is attractive for children but sometimes I did not understand what they said.
Group 2 (Mehmet, armagan)
Mehmet pronounced vegetable wrongly.they speak for very short time but their visual part is good for children.
Children program group 2 (Neslihan,duygu)
The teaching part is good.their pronounciation is generally good (again wrongly pronounced). However, I think they shouldn’t sing the song two times.
Children program group 3 (gassun ,Hanife)
Visual parts in the video are really good.Apart from small mistakes, their pronounciation is also good.
Singing a song is also good way of teaching.
The third video(Ceyda, gülsen)
İt is like a really children program. They choose a good place for their video.However,I think they should speak much more because their speaking is insufficient.
the first video(hatice,ceylan,gülşah)
ReplyDeletesorry friend but I could not hear your speech very well because the sound is bad.however, I think you are succesfull and your video has been suitable for the topic.thanks.
mehmet and armagan
ReplyDeleteyour video is good. your idea is creative.however ı couldnt hear your sound very well. thanks
neslıhan and duygu
your video is generallye good but your sentences are a bit long. for children program sentences should be short.
You do not speak many things in the video. mehmet pronounces the words "answer" and "fruit" wrongly.However, the video is good.thanks..
ReplyDeletegassun, ferda and hanife
ReplyDeleteı'm sory but ı cannot hear your sounds. your video has low sound. however, your idea is good. thanks!
fatma kübra
your video is good. your pronunciation is good thanks!
ceyda and gülşen
İt is like children program. you choose a good place for your video.However,I think your speech is short. thanks!
the third video(neslihan and duygu)
ReplyDeleteThe video is a bit long, the game was not necessary but the video is enjoyable. It is really successful. Neslihan pronounces the word "again" wrongly. Thanks, friends..
1st Group
ReplyDeleteGulsah, Ceylan and Hatice
Hi kids!:) Your video is very good. Your costumes and scene are good. I have not heard any error in your pronounciation. Your intonation is also good and appropriate for a children prgram. Thanx for your efforts. Good job.
Mehmet and Armagan
Oh guys I think you are so creative. Your video is enjoyable and educative. Thanx for your efforts! :)
Duygu and Neslihan
Hi girls! You look so sweet:)Your video is good. Children will learn lots of things:) However, neslihan pronounces `congratulation` wrongly. Thanx for your efforts.
The 4th video(gassun, hanife, ferda)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video, friends. Your speeches, voice, speed,... everything is suitable for a children programme. Thank you!
The 5th video(hande, fatma, kübra)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video , friends. It is successful and enjoyable. Your speaking is clear and voice is good. Thanks...
The 6th video(üstün, ceyda and gülşen)
ReplyDeleteFriends! Your video is good. It can be understand that you have studied for your video. I think Gülşen could be more energic for the video because it is a children programme. Thank you!
first video ceylan, hatice, gülşah
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good in terms of costumes, decoration.however, ı cant hear your voice. ı think it is not your fault but it is sth related to camera.
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ReplyDelete(Ceylan, Gülşah, Hatice)
Hi girls, I think your video is very suitable for children. You look very nice in those costumes :) and the choice of the chicken song is good. Your pronunciation is good, but I sometimes had difficulty in hearing you. Thanks for your efforts..
(Zehra and Esra)
ReplyDeleteI think your video is good. I did not notice any pronunciation mistakes. However, I realized that Zehra made a grammatical mistake.She said five yellow lemon. It must be five yellow lemons. Generally, it is a very successful video. Thanks for your efforts.:)
(Gülşah, Hatice, Ceylan)
ReplyDeleteYour costumes and music are very attractive for children. Also, the place is suitable for children programs and you acted very well. However, sometimes I could not hear you exactly. Thanks
(Armağan, Mehmet)
ReplyDeleteYour video is appropriate for children programs, but it should be better that you spoke more. Also, 'fruit' is pronounced wrongly. Thanks.
(Neslihan, Duygu)
ReplyDeleteYour video is educative, which is the characteristic of children programs. Also, your song is very nice, but it is not necessary to sing one more time. Your speeches are clear, but I noticed a grammatical mistake ('You did very bad.')
(Zehra, Esra)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good and educative. Your intonation is good. However, there are some grammatical mistakes. (four red tomato, five yellow lemon). Thanks.
(Gassun, Hanife, Ferda)
ReplyDeleteYour video is very nice and your idea(teaching colors in an enjoyable way) is good. Bobo is also successful. Thanks.
(Hande, Fatma, Kübra)
ReplyDeleteYour video is very good. Teaching sense organs is a good idea and different from other videos.
Also, your voice and intonation are good. Thanks.
(Ceyda, Gülşen, Üstün)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. The place you chose is also good. I think everthing is OK. Thanks.
first video(gülşah, hatice and ceylan)
ReplyDeleteyour video seems so nice but sometimes it is diffucult to understand what you say. ıt is a good video friends.
second one(armağan and memet E.)
Guys you are creative. This is an educational children program but I think the word tomato is pronounced wrongly. In general, it is a good video.
(neslihan , duygu)
I could not notice a grammatical mistake but there happens some confusion while singing the song. Except this, there is nothing to say...good job
(zehra, esra)
friends, you seem pretty and your speech is clear enough to understand:)
Fatma, kübra and hande)
this is very educational children program and nice friends:))) pretty kids
(üstün, gülsen and ceyda)
friends good job:) Your pronounciations are true in general.
group3 hande, fatma kübra
ReplyDeleteyour video is very good. your pronounciation is very good, also.you emphasize important words such as; mouth, nose. your song is a good way to teach the functions of sense organs.congratulations!
Group1 (Gülşah, Ceylan, Haitce) Your video is so nice so funny but i am sorry about that your sound is not so clear :(. Its a good idea to use clothes like this like puppet :D thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 (Mehmet, Armağan) Your video is so nice so funny. If i was a father i could use it to learn my child the fruits.:D Its so good sample.Furthermore, it is a good idea to use real puppets. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup1(Ceylan,Hatice,Gülşah):It was generally a good video,friends.You were good.The video was suitable for children programme even though there was a little problem about the sound system.Pay attention to it,friends.Gülşah mispronounced the word"bear" as ı heard. Ceylan spoke at the same tone at the begginning of the video. Hatice was good. She really talked as if she were an old woman.Thanks,friends.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 (Neslihan, Duygu) It is a good idea tosing a song but its is not singed simultaneously. It is very nice orange is orange :D.But the children who don't know the colors cannot know the meaning of bulls eye i think so, it's wrong usage. You should have explained the meaning or used it in other words. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup2 (Zehra, Esra) it is a nice educative programme for children. It teachs not only the colors but also the numbers. Its a good job. But in one part you said until to five i think that its a wrong usage. Thanks.
ReplyDelete1st group second video(Armağan,Mehmet) It was a good video.I liked it.It teaches topics to children,which means your video was suitable for a children programme.Armağan you were really good.You changed your noise,which was also good for a children programme. Mehmet you were good generally,yet you should pay attention to the intonation a bit more.
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 (Gassun, Hanife, Ferda) Its different idea to teach the color through the help of rainbow. It remembered me barney show, it is a good puppet and Gassun sound it very nice. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 (Hande, Fatma, Kübra) Firstly, I want to say that the children are very genuis :D. While all groups tried to teach numbers and colors you tried to teach body organs. It is very nice. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup 3 (Üstün, Ceyda, Gülşen)Its very nice programme i like it very much. The first scenes that shows other children are very attracting. The place for the video is so convenient. The house which you go in :D. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 third video( Neslihan,Duygu): It was a really good video.I liked it.You started the programme with a song,which was good for a children programme.It was a teaching programme for children.Neslihan mispronounced the word "congratulations".Neslihan made some grammatical mistakes, such as "who will hits" and "it places here".Neslihan and Duygu, you were good.Thanks,friends.
ReplyDeleteGroup2 second video(Zehra, Esra)It was a good video,friends.ıt was suitable for a children programme.You changed your voices,which was good for a children programme.Esra mispronounced the word "lemon" and "yellow".Zehra mispronounced the words "three" and "of".Esra made some grammatical mistakes,such as 3 green cucumber"and "are there in the plate".Thanks, friends.
ReplyDeleteGroup3 1st video(Gassun,Hanife,Ferda)It was a good video,friends.It was suitable for a children programme. You changed your voices,which was good for a children programme.I especially liked Bobo's intonation.Thank you friends.
ReplyDeleteGroup3 second video(Hande, Fatma, Kübra) It was generally a good video. Itr was a teaching children programme.In some sentences Fatma and the blue friend spoke at the same tone.Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGroup3 third video:(Ceyda,Gülsen,Üstün) I liked your video. It was good, friends.You taught songs to children,which was also good for a children programme.Thank you.
ReplyDelete(Hande, Fatma and Kübra)
ReplyDeleteHi girls, I liked your video. It is very succesful and is educative for children. There are some grammatical errors. Kübra sould have said "skins and "mouths". Thanks for your efforts.:)
(Neslihan, Duygu)
ReplyDeleteYour video is creative for children. Also you look nice The song is good and enjoyable but it is not necessary to sing again it. Your voices clear. Thanks
(Ceylan Gülşah Hatice)
Your place is very suitable for children and costumes are also intresting. I like your performances, you acted well but the voice is not clear sometimes I could not hear you. Thanks
(Armağan Mehmet)
I like puppets and I think your video is creative.‘fruit’ and ‘answer’ are pronunced wrongly. Generally it is good video. Thanks
(Ayşegül Aylin Yasemin)
I like your video and will try to do frog It is an educative and enjoyable video and your performances are good but you can pay attention to your pronunciation. Thanks
(Zehra Esra)
Your video is generally good and educative Also their voices are clear but there are some mistakes ‘3 cucumber’ and mispronunced ‘lemon’ Thanks
(Hanife Gassun Ferda)
Your video is good. BoBo’s performance and intonation are suitable for children. Hanife and Ferda acted well Thanks
(Hande Fatma Kübra)
Your video is generally good and enjoyable. your performances are suitable for programme but ‘connect’ is pronunced wrongly Thanks
gülşah,hatice,ceylan you are so sweet my friends. I like your program so much.I couldn't find any pronouncation mistakes. thanks my friends:))
ReplyDeletemehmet, armağan I liked your programme.you make a very creative and enjoyable program. fruit pronounced wrongly. Thanks my friends :))
ReplyDeleteneslihan,duygu. you seem so sweet.I couldn't find any pronouncation mistakes.your programme is so educative for children thanks my friends:))
ReplyDeleteyasemin, aylin I like your video.It is an educative video and your performances are good but it is a bit boring program İt can be more enjoyable programme. Thanks
ReplyDeleteceylan hatice and gülşah: very enjoyable:) very nice:) it is good of you to speak slowly because it is important for a children program.intonations are good. however what you said sometimes couldn't be understood because of the problm related to the camera. anyway it is a good video thanks;)
ReplyDeletearmağn and mehmet: armağan you are great!!:))does that voice realyy belong to you?? both of your intonations are suitable for a childern program, but you generally repeated the same sentences:((:((
ReplyDeleteneslihan and duygu:) sweet girls:))neslihan, you pronunced some words wrongly I am not wrong because of the shooting.for example you said "again". that is you pronunced the (i) sound.then you pronunced the word throw like "trov".that is, you did not use "th"sound.also,the word "them is pronunced wrongly:((and you spoke a bit fast.it is a good video girls;))
ReplyDeleteyasemin aylin and ayşegül: you all mispronunced the "th" sounds.there were some long sentences especialyy yasemin's one sentence was very long for a child.also I saw all of you reluctant. ıf it was a real program, no child would watch:)you could have fixed your voice acoording to children.maybe children program is not your style:)but, the toys and baloons are very sweett.It is not bad thanks:)
ReplyDeletezehra and esra: girls you are great!! both of you are very sweet. your speaking style and intonations are very good for a chidren program.however bot of you have problems with thw pronunciation of the words: white and three. when looked at your mouthes,it can be seen that you used normal "v"sound not "w"sound, and again you pronunced the normal "t"sound instead of "th". however, it was a good video congratulations
ReplyDelete2nd video 1st video(Ayşegül,Yasemin,Aylin):It was a good video friends,but you could have talked a bit more lively for a children programme.Aylin mispronounced the word "triangle".Ayşegül put the stress on adjectives,which is good.Yasemin was also good at giving the stress of the words. Aylin put did the intonation well when asking questions.Thanks friends
ReplyDeleteyasemin,ayşegül and aylin
ReplyDeleteThe video is really colourful and it is generally good. However, it is a bit boring because you should pay attention to your voice and intonation. It could have been better if you have chanced your voices. You speaks in the same tone during the video. Thanks friends...
esra and zehra
ReplyDeleteYour video is really good and educative. I liked your intonation but not your pronounciation. Please pay attention to pronounce the "w" and "th" sounds. Espacially, when you say "three", it is understood as you say "tree". Generally your video is really successful.
Gülşah, Ceylan, Hatice.
ReplyDeletehi friends,
i liked your video so much cus its scene and your performances are very good. Also, There are no noticeable mistakes.
thank u.
Armağan and Mehmet,
ReplyDeletehi friends,
your video is very educative. It is a good idea to use that dolls. However, Mehmet could change his voice.
thank u.
Ayşegül, Aylin, Yasemin.
ReplyDeletehi friends,
You seem very sweet. Aylin could have spoken more attractively. Apart from this, there are no noticeable mistakes.However, you should be more careful about pronouncing the word origami. your pronounciation is closer to turkish accent.
thank u.
Zehra and Esra,
ReplyDeleteyour video is good and it is really educative.
there are no noticeable mistakes. You should be more careful while pronouncing the word cucumber, Esra. You say kukumbır, it is wrong.
thank u.
ceylan hatıce, gulsah
ReplyDeleteyou girls are really creative. i did not found any mispronunciation. perfect.
mehmet e. and armagan
ReplyDeleteyou both mispronunce "answer". in pronunciation, there should be no "w" and it should be with "siva" after "s" letter.
neslihan and duygu
ReplyDeletegirls congratulations. there are no clear mispronunciation in you speech:)
for armagan mehmet
ReplyDeleteyour program is really enjoying and armagan your tones of voice are very sweet.thanks
for gülşah hatice and ceylan
the environment and the costumes are so nice and the program is very enjoying.however, I couldnt understand the gülşah"s sentences very clearly.thanks
for yasemin ayşegül and aylin
your program is educative and nice but as a children program it could have been more enjoying and sentences could be said in a childish way. thanks friend
for esra and zehra
ReplyDeletecongratulations friends.your video is both informative and enjoyable.I liked it very much.thanks
Ceylan, Hatice and Gulsah.
ReplyDeleteyou look very well organized. your costumes ad the place is great but i cannot write about pronounciation because ı cant hear what you say clearly
Mehmet E. and Armagan.
ReplyDeleteyour video is nice especially the puppets and Armagans voice.I could not find a clear pronounciation and grammer mistake but I guess Mehmet said "frut" for fruit.
Neslihan and Duygu.
ReplyDeleteyou sing great. good start but it is too long I think.neslihan you act wery well and I liked your pronounciation.duygu dosent talk much but she also performs well.
Aysegul, Aylin and Yasemin.
ReplyDeleteit is an enjoyable programmes.I catched one mistake from Aylin. she said the word "programme" as it is pronounced in turkish. however you all speak clear it is a nice video. thanks
your video is good and enjoyable. some mistake;
ReplyDeleteEsra: 'applause' you mispronouce
(Ceylan,Hatice and Gülşah)
ReplyDeletefriends, your video is good.Your costumes,scene and müsic are really suitable for children programs.However,there is a problem about the sound of the video;so,Icould't hear your speech clearly.Thanks:)
(Mehmet and Armağan)
Your video is appropriate for children.It is creative.Mehmet pronounced the 'fruit' wrongly.Vocalization is really good.Thanks:)
(Neslihan and Duygu)
Friends, you speak clearly and naturally.Also it is a good program.
(Ayşegül,Yasemin and Aylin)
ReplyDeleteI think it is a creative video.Maybe, Aylin could have spoken a bit louder.Thanks:)
(Zehra and Esra)
Your video is good and educative.Your intonation is good,too.There are grammatical mistakes in 'four red tomato' and 'five yellow lemon'.Thanks:)
(Gassun,Hanife and Ferda)
ReplyDeleteI especially liked Gassun's vocalization.Ferda should have spoken a bit more.Singing a song about clours is good.Thanks:)
(Hande,Fatma and Kübra)
Your video is really enjoyable.The idea of teaching sense organs is different from others.You speak naturally.Thanks:)
(Ceyda,Gülsen and Üstün)
I think you should have spoken a bit more.Apart from this,you are successfull.Thanks:)
aysegul aylın yasemin have no pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeletezehra and esra
ReplyDeleteyour video is good. i like it but you mispronunce the word "applause"
gassun fatma hanife
ReplyDeletegirls no mispronunciation. congratulations!!!
and your video is fun, i love BOBO:)
hande fatma kubra
ReplyDeletegirls you are so creative. perfect job:):):)
you guys did a good job. but there should have been more speech so that we could hear your pronunsiations better
ReplyDeletethe last one is for ustun gulsen and ceyda
ReplyDeleteThe first video:Ceylan,Hatice and Gülşah: I enjoyed so much while watching your video: ) good job!
ReplyDeleteThe second video: Mehmet E. And Armagan: This is my favourite video it is really very funny. Congratulations!
Thethird video: Neslihan and Duygu: You look candy Also, you sing the song at the beginning of the video successfully.I think it is difficult to memorizegood job
The fourth video: Aysegul,Yasemin,Aylin: In this video my friend's pronunciations are good; there is not any remarkable mistake. Congratulations!
The fifth video: Zehra's and Esra: Your video was successful and you look cuteespecially Zehra.
The sixth video: Gassun, Hanife and Ferda. : Your video was good in terms of pronunciation intonation and grammar. Congratulations!
The seventh video: Hande, Fatma and Kubra: You are really lovely and, your concept is good. Good job.
The eighth video: by Ceyda, Gulsen and Ustun: This is my second favourite video It is obvious that you are well prepared and I enjoyed myself so much while I was watching you. Thanks to your efforts
The first video:Ceylan,Hatice and Gülşah
ReplyDeleteI think your video is very good. Costumes and decoration are appropriate for a children program. However, I could hardly hear you.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The second video: Mehmet E. And Armagan
Your video is very enjoyable. In terms of view, it should be better but that is not a problem, I think.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The third video: Neslihan and Duygu
The video is successful. The song is proper for it. Maybe the game could be omitted.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The fourth video: Aysegul,Yasemin,Aylin
Your video is generally good and the idea of making a frog is creative.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The fifth video: Zehra and Esra
Your video is generally good. There are some pronunciation mistakes such as cucumber. I think, you should have been more creative in terms of the activity you did in program.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The sixth video: Gassun, Hanife and Ferda
Your video is good. I could not find any pronunciation mistakes. Your idea is good.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The seventh video: Hande, Fatma and Kubra
Your idea is creative and different from others. The video is generally good.Anyway thanks for your efforts.
The eighth video: Ceyda, Gulsen and Ustun
The video is good. It is enjoyable. Anyway thanks for your efforts.
(Ceylan, Hatice, Gülşah)
ReplyDeleteHi, friends. In spite of unclear sound, I liked your video. In my opinion, it is appropriate for children. It is a creative concept. Thanks…
(Mehmet E., Armağan)
Hi, friends. It is a good video. I liked Armağan’s vocalization, especially. Mehmet should have paid attention to his pronunciation. All in all, it is good. Thanks…
(Neslihan, Duygu)
Hi, friends. I liked your programme and it is suitable for the children, I think. I couldn’t find any clear mistakes your speeches. Thanks…
(Ayşegül, Aylin, Yasemin)
Hi, friends. Your concept is creative. However, it can be a little bit difficult for children, I think. You could have changed your voice. Also, you should not have used Turkish names. All in all, it is good. Thanks…
(Zehra, Esra)
Hi, friends. I liked your performance, especially Zehra’s. You also could have used other names instead of Turkish names. It is generally good video in spite of some grammatical mistakes. Thanks…
(Gassun, Hanife, Ferda)
Hi , friends. I liked your video. Gassun is good at vocalization, I think. Your programme is suitable for children and educative. Hanife’s and Ferda’s performances are good. Thanks…
(Hande, Fatma, Kübra)
Hi, friends. Your programme’s concept is creative and educative. I liked your all performances because you spoke very naturally. It is good thing. Singing a song is also a good method for this topic. Thanks…
(Ceyda, Gülsen, Üstün)
Hi, friends. It is a good children programme and I liked your performances. Thanks…
group 1. (ceylan hatice gülşah)
ReplyDeleteFriends, your costumes and the place you choose is very good for a children programme. You acted well but I could not hear you exactky what you said. The sound of the video is too bad.
(mehmet and armağan)
Your video is enjoyful and you acted well but you mispronounced 'fruit' and you shouldn't have said 'stupid' it is bad example for children:) and I don't like the music it could be a children song.
(neslihan and duygu)
friends, you acted well but you could be more active and you mispronounced 'again' and 'congrulations'. Also, you could sing the song at the end of the video and it sould be a color song.
group 2. (zehra and esra)
I liked your video but there are some grammatical mistakes. You didn't pay attention to the plural nouns. Apart from this, your pronunciation is good.
group 3. (handa fatma and kübra)
Genius kids, your video is very successful. Your subject is different from other videos and your sing is also different. Hande and fatma acted well you seemed really nice.
(ceyda gülsen and üstün)
Kids, your video is enjoyful but mostly, you sang a song or played children games. You could have been more active in your video.
THANKS all friends for your efforts..:)
dear neslihan. your video is good but there are some points ı have to say:
ReplyDeletefor the whole video only you spoke, but I think this is not your own video; this is a co operation.
I hope you will be able to make it more balanced next time.
also; you(all) did not have harmony with the song and also with each other.
while the sing is played everyone was saying something. there are some pronounciation mistakes also,
they are: colours,introduce, them, ask, old, three, apple, here, third, again, throw, turn, winner,
also you said: this colour is green, can you give an example to the green colour, the green colour,
this colur is red,the red colour,our friend's tshirt of our friend's, board(it is dartboard)
you did very bad(you could say ;you coudn't succeed)
clap our friend(its usage is; to give a clap to/for smn)
and last one; you are making a video to speeak but instead of filling the video with music, you should have spoken more...
GROUP 1 VIDEO 1 CEYLAN,HATİCE AND GÜLŞAH: You ae great. I cannot say anything excepr for this:D ThANks for this wonderful video:D:)
ReplyDeleteGROUP 1 VIDEO 2 MEHMET E. AND ARMAĞAN: I really liked your video. Both of you are very talented in imitating voices:) However, you could be more vivid and you could speak more.Nevertheless, thank your for this video.
GROUP 1 VIDEO 3 NESLİHAN AND DUYGU: In general, you have a good video. However, as it is in the other videos, you have some grammatical mistakes. Firstly, Neslihan says '..each of you have..' She should have used 'has'. Except for this, it is good for children to speak slowly and word by word. Neslihan's speaking is useful in terms of children. Anyway, you have a good job. Thanks friends:)
GROUP 2 VIDEO 1 AYŞEGÜL, AYLİN AND YASEMİN: In terms of its educational aspect, it is a good video;however, you are not so vivid and you seem as if you talk by somebody's force. You are talking unwillingly. Excpet for these, I have not much to say. Thanks for your struggle:)
GROUP 2 VIDEO 2 ZEHRA AND ESRA: You have a good video, friends. It was both enjoyful and educational. However, you have also some pronuciation mistakes as all of us have. Thanks for your job:)
GROUP 3 VIDEO 1 GASSUN, HANİFE AND FERDA: You have a good video in general; however, it is a bit still I mean there is so much silence and and there is not much speaking. Nevertheless, it is useful for students to learn the colours.Your pronunciation is good,as well. Thanks for your effort:)
GROUP 3 VIDEO 2 HANDE, KÜBRA AND FATMA: You are good in your video. You have an enjoyable video. Like the other children programme videos, yours is also educative. There are not so many mistakes that corrupt the video. Like all of us, you have mistakes in your pronunciation. Nevertheless, thanks for your effort:)
GROUP 3 VIDEO 3 CEYDA,GÜLŞEN AND ÜSTÜN: You have a good video in general. However, like the other friends, you have also some mistakes related to your pronunciation. Anyway,thanks for your effort:)
(Group 1 Ceylan, Hatice and Gülşah)
ReplyDeleteYour speeches cannot be heard clearly. I think, there is a technical problem. You make simple sentences. It is a good point for children programs. Thanks.
(Group 1 Mehmet E. and Armağan)
You pronounce the names of the fruits clearly. Also, you speak slowly. They are good points of the video. thanks.
(Group 1 Neslihan and Duygu)
The sentences are simple and clear. They can be understood easily. Thanks.
(Group 2 Ayşegül, Aylin and Yasemin)
ReplyDeleteThis video is enjoyable. You make a frog. At the same time, you tell how to make a frog clearly. Your sentences are suitable for children programs. Thanks.
(Group 2 Zehra and Esra)
This video is perfect. It is educative. Both colors and numbers are taught. You pronounce their names clearly. Thanks.
(Group 3 Gassun, Hanife and Ferda)
ReplyDeleteYou teach the colors in an enjoyable way. Both you tell the colors while you are making and you tell them by singing a song. Thanks.
(Group 3 Ceyda, Gülsen and Üstün)
Your video is enjoyable. Your game is good. Also, Ceyda sings the song perfectly. I like your video. Thanks.
(ceylan, hatice, gülşah)
ReplyDeleteIt is so smart of you to introduce animals in their appeareance. Your givinf the features of animals in order to give
information to children is also a good job. The one and only mistake and problem of the video is its sound! pls attention that.
(mehmet e. armagan)
fruit (Pr.mistake)
mehmet you shouldnt have said "you stupid" its a CHILDREN programme.
(neslihan, duygu)
your speech was good. some phrases are so educative ; counting down, spelling etc.
(ayşegül, aylin, yasemin)
I think that u made a good video but somethn was missing in your video. its the enthusiasm..
the geometrical shapes are so informative. u should look up their pronuncations again(triangle and square)
(zehra, esra)
friends, honestly, your video is really good, but there is so much repetition about the questions i mean your speeches.
(ferda, hanife, gassun)
no need to comment, its a good job.
but hanife pls act a little bit active ok?
(hande, fatma, kübra)
girls u are so good! its an informative video. topic is good and educative. congrats.
THANK YOU ALL.
1.group: 1.video: Actually your costumes are very nice and the decoration is also very suitable to your topic. You could speak in a better intonation and fluent. But generally you are good.thank you friends:)
ReplyDelete2.video:very cute:) Your intonations are suitbale for children program.
3,video: The song is very sweet:D There are some pronunciation mistakes;congratulations,fruit. But generally you are very educative.Thank you:D
2.group: 1.video:Very educating:) Even I did not know how tom make frog:) You mispronunciated triangle but generally very well.
2.video: You are very good at teaching vegetables and fruits:)you sometimes mispronunciated cucumber, tomato and lemon but not in every sentences.thank you:)
group3: 1.video: They are very good:) and there is no pronunciation mistakes actuually apart from color:) your intonations are very good.congratulations
2.video:you are very cute girls:)very educating also. Your intonation and behaviour are very suitable for children program. Some pronunciation mistakes are made:nose,ear.special.thank you:)
3.video:very very enjoyable:D Ceyda you are very sweet:) You sing like a children:D circle is mispronunciated:(
first video gülsah hatice.. ; the video is interesting because of their clothes. but ı could not understand exactly what they said so i cannot make any comment about pronunciation
ReplyDeletemehmet armağan video; it is very comic video. i liked itvery much
ReplyDeletecongrt....
neslihan and duygu video; yr video is very enjoyable. there so little pronunciation mistakes
it is a good job girl
zehra and esra video;your video is good but you pronounced "cucumber, tomato" wrongly and ı wanna say you pronounced "three" wrongly you said that "tree" please pay attention
congrt....
aysegül aylin.. video; girls' yr video is good i could not find any pronunciation mistake exacly anyway good job thx
ReplyDeletefatma hande kübra; girls yr topic is different from the others and yr intonations are good. i liked your barrettess
congratulationsss.....
hanife ferda bobo sorry gassun yr video is enjoyable and teaching also gassun used her voice tone influentially i liked very much thx your efforts
1. group 1. video: good video in general.you acted well.your intonation was good but your pronunciation is not clear. It was difficult to hear because of camera. Good luck.
ReplyDelete1. group 2. video: enjoyable video. your intonation is good. mehmet mispronounced "fruit".good in general. good luck.
ReplyDelete1. group 3. video: enjoyable and educational video. I didn't find any pronunciation mistake. good luck.
ReplyDelete2.group 1. video : educative video but it is a bit boring. you should have spoke in a more enjoyable way and changed your voices of tone. good luck
ReplyDelete2. group 2. video :it is really good video. I cannot find any clear pronunciation mistake. it is educative and enjoyable.good luck
ReplyDelete3. group 1. video : It is really good. I like your intonation, voices of tone and your performances. There is not any clear pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 video1(Ceylan,Hatice,Gülşah)your appearance is good.your organization is good but I couldnt hear your voices clearly.
ReplyDeleteGroup1 video2(Mehmet E. ann Armağan)you are very creative.your video is enjoyable.Mehmet proounced vegetable and fruit wrongly.good job friends.
Group1 video3(Neslihan,Duygu)your programme is good.your pronouncation is good but your video is long.thanks friends.
Group2 video1(Ayşegül,Aylin,Yasemin)I like your video.your performances are good but you pay attention to your pronouncation.thanks friends.
Group2 video2(Zehra,Esra)you have succesful video.your intonation is good.However,there are some grammatical mistakes such as,five yellow lemon,four red tomato.
Ceylan Hatice Gülşah
ReplyDeleteyour costume and music is really good.but ı could not understand some of the sentences because of the sound.
Neslihan Duygu
Your song is good but ou could not have sang it twice. Bot of your speeches is good...
Mehmet E. Armağan
Your video is really funny but view could have been better.
Ayşegül Aylin Yasmin
Nothin ! :)
Zehra and Esra
your intonation is suitable for the children programme.Also I could not find any pronunciatin mistakes.
Gasun Hanife Ferda
Bob made the video enjoyable or else...
Hande Fatma Kübra
kübra and fatma made some pronunciation mistkes but all of your intonations are convenient for the children programme.
Group1 video2(Mehmet E. ann Armağan)
ReplyDeleteyou are very creative.your video is enjoyable.It is really educative for kids..thnx
Group1 video3(Neslihan,Duygu)
your video is good in genereal.I liked your song...you have tried to teach colours so it is really educative for children...thnx
Group2 video1(Ayşegül,Aylin,Yasemin)
This is an enjoyable video. You make a frog and you teach how to make a frog clearly. Your sentences are suitable for children programs. Thnx...
Group2 video2(Zehra,Esra)
you have made a good children programme apart from a few mistakes ;
five yellow lemon,four red tomato.
Gasun Hanife Ferda
hi...there is so much silence in your video.but in general your pronunciation is good,and it is really useful to teach colours :)
Hande Fatma Kübra
your video is also educative like others this is good I think.I liked thatyou spoke very naturally.thnx