The first video is news about a sleepwalker and discussion on sleepwalking by Hatice, Duygu and Armagan.
The second video is news about Manchester united hooligans waiting for the big match! by Gulsah and Neslihan
The third video is news about plane crash by Mehmet and Ceylan.
News and Discussion Programs Group 2
The first video is news about pollution by Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra.
The second video is news about Nuclear Energy by Aylin and Yasemin.
News and Discussion Programs Group 3
The first video is CFK News-UFO by Ceyda, Ferda and Kübra.
The second video is Australia fires newsby Gülsen, Fatma, and Gassun.
The third video is news and discussion video by Hande, Hanife and Üstün.
hande, üstün and hanife,, you're so creative... in Miami and a plane crash... but, your plane has a Turkish flag...:) and also, in Miami, is there winter season ? with those clothes...:))
ReplyDelete(group 1, hatice duygu armağan)
ReplyDeletein the video the anchorwoman speaks less slowly than an anchorwoman (news speaker)does. it should have been faster and more fluent in my opinion. also the word "occur" was pronounced incorrectly. on the other hand the topic of the news is good.in general it's ok ı think.
HANDE TAVŞANOĞLU
(group 1 hatice armağan duygu)
ReplyDeleteI think your video is generally good.doctor(hatice) speaks fluent and naturel apart from one word's pronunciation (occur).Anchorwoman(duygu) also speaks understandable but a little slow I think. While listening the doctor, Armağan is nodding her head I like it. She looks like a real news speaker.Burcu KARAKUZU
(group 2 gülşah, neslihan)
ReplyDeleteI like the video very much:)but I cant hear clearly the speaking of neslihan because of the holigans.The conversations are a little short I think but generally their pronunciations and atmosphere are really good.
(Group 2, Gülşah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteIn the video, the news speaker should have spoken more fluently, I think.
Also, the noise prevents us from hearing the saying of the reporter.
In general, it is good.
group 3 ceyda ferda kübra
ReplyDeleteThe video is good especially the end of it:) Their pronunciations are understandable. each of them speaks niether too long nor too short They are ok.thanks
(Fırat Giray) I appreciate üstün, hanife and hande.. The plot of the news is creative. Video had been preapred perfectly. I can't find anything to say.. thanks for your good job :)
ReplyDelete(Group 1, Duygu, Armağan, Hatice)
ReplyDeleteThe topic of the news is interesting. The news speaker should have spoken a little fast, I think, but her pronunciation is good (there is a grammar mistake:...connecting with)In addition , the reporter says 'what kind of questions can be taken (She should have said 'what kind of measures')Also, the doctor speaks fluently and naturally, I like that
group3 second video gülsen fatma gassun
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I want to say that gassun's acting is really good.Altough her crying, I understood all of her speaking. Their video is generally good also. Anchorwoman speaks a little fast but understandable but her pronunciation can be more better.gülsen's speaking is also ok.
(Group 3, Ceyda, Ferda, Kübra)
ReplyDeleteIn the video, the news reporter speaks well, I think. Also, the woman's gestures are very good. She looks like as if she really saw UFOs:)
Thanks
group 3 third video üstüne hande hanife
ReplyDeleteTheir plane has a Turkish flag I like it very much:) Their video and performances are generally good.like all of us,they could have pronunced the words more better.thanks.
(Hande, Hanife, üstün)
ReplyDeleteYour news topic is good.
The news speaker's body movement is a bit distracting. Also, the pilot should have spoken more fluently.
In general, it is OK. Thanks
(group 3 first video about ufos) your topic is interesting and it is also funny. you play your roles very good. I think you could find a better ufo video :) it is not attractive. Yet, I liked your video.
ReplyDelete(group 3 secon video about fires) Gassun, your role was perfect but I couldn't help laughing:) I think you could use a news advertisement like the other gorups. apart from this, in general meaning your video is good.
(Gülşen, Fatma, Gassun)
ReplyDeleteThe news speaker, I think, makes some pronunciation mistakes. Also, she should have spoken more fluently. The reporter speaks understandably. Finally, Gassun's gestures while speaking, is very good, in my opinion.
section 3-group Üstün, Hande, Hanife.
ReplyDeletei liked your video so much. Also, Üstün's speech was very fluent. However, the voice of the news speaker cannot be heard properly. thank u.
section 3- group Gülşen, Fatme, Gassun.
ReplyDeleteYour video is very good. Furthermore, The speech of the newsspeaker is fluent. However, the reporter's speech is long, i think. When comes to Gassun, she is my number one. Both her speech and role is good.
Lastly, i want to add something that it would be better not to use your own names.
thank you.
for group 2 gulsah and neslihan
ReplyDeletefirst of all,it seems that you spent very good time while you were recording this video. it must be enjoyable. you made effort, it is clear. however, holigans were shouting so much that ı couldnt hear what the reporter said very well. but it is well-done:)
for ceyda kübra ferda
ReplyDeletegirls, ı am aware of what CKF means:) congratulations for your creativity of imitating ufo view. it was very successful. also ceyda had really seen a ufo in my opinion, it is so credible.but ufo was pronounced wrongly i think. it should be, let me say here: yu ef oo. not yufo.if you like you can check it m-w dictionary. kubra is like an anchorwoman and ferda is also successful. good job!
for gassun fatma gülsen
ReplyDeletegood job! gassun acted perfectly.also gülsen spoke naturally. fatma was serious like an actual news speaker.also, at the background there was a tv and it was playing. it gave the effect of live broadcasting. it was a good detail. ı liked your video.
(grup 1, Hatice,Duygu,Armağan)
ReplyDeleteThe anchorwoman should speak a bit faster and give the emotion according to the topic of the news because the news is interesting and she(duygu)states the news is surprising.Therefore, she should have spoken according to this emotion.However,her pronunciation is good.Doctor(hatice) speaks fluently.Their video is generally good.I liked it.:)
Group 1: Hatice Amağan, Duygu
ReplyDeleteIn m opinion, the topic of the new is attractive. I like that. The speech of the news speaker(Duygu) is very understandable. However, to me, she should have spoken a little fast as the news speaker. Hatice speaks fluently and I like the gestures of Armağan. Thanks...
(group 2, Gülşah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteThere is so much noise;so, I can't hear Neslihan's speech clearly,but she reflects the emotion there naturally.Also,Gülşah says 'Oh!there is so much noise',it is good,She gives her reaction in a good way.:)
Group 2: Gülşah, Neslihan
ReplyDeleteThe topic of the news and environment for this are good, but I didn't understand the speech of Neslihan exacly. I like the gestures of the news speaker(Gülşah) in spite of some pronunciation mistakes. I like the video. Thanks...
(group 3,Ceyda,Ferda,Kübra)
ReplyDeleteThe intonation and pronunciation of the anchorwoman are good.Reporter also speaks in a good way and her gestures are good.The woman speaks naturally as if she really saw an UFO:)I liked their video very much.:)
Group 3: Ceyda, Ferda, Kübra
ReplyDeleteI like the end of the video very much, too. The topic of the news is good and funny. The news speaker speaks fluently and understandably. The gestures of all are suitable for the news, in my opinion. I liked it. Thanks…
(group 3,Gülşen,Fatma,Gassun)
ReplyDeleteThe speaker of the news makes some mistakes in pronunciation of wors(about,injure...).She moves her hands very much.She should have spoken more fluently.Gassun makes her role well.:)
Group 3 second video: Gülsen, Fatma, Gassun
ReplyDeleteThe news speaker should have spoken fluently. Also, her body movements are a bit distracting for spectators, in my opinion. However, the speaking of her is understandable is spite of some pronunciation mistakes. I like the gestures of Gassun while speaking. It is really good. Thanks…
(group 3,Üstün,Hande,Hanife)
ReplyDeleteThe speaker(hande) moves constantly.She should have paid attention to this.Her intonation while asking questions to the reporter is good.Some words are pronunced wrongly by the pilot and the reporter.Generally, it is a good video.:)
Group 3 third video: Üstün, Hande, Hanife
ReplyDeleteThe news topic and atmosphere for this are really good. The news speaker speaks fluently and understandably. The pilot and reporter could have pronounced some words better. However, I liked the video. Thanks…
Group 1: Hatice, Amağan, Duygu
ReplyDeleteThe news video is generally good, I think. Of course, there are some mistakes in pronunciation such as 'occur' and 'engages'in Hatice's speech. Also, there is a problem about flow and breathing in Duygu's speech and it is really long because it lasts for nearly two minutes. This is really long for an news presenter. When it comes to Armağan's speech, it is good, I think. Anyway, thanks for your efforts...
Group 2: Gülşah, Neslihan
ReplyDeleteThe news video is really good. While Neslihan is speaking, the atmosphere is very realistic apart from the paper Neslihan has. I think she could speak without it. Thanks for your efforts...
(group 1 Hatice, Duygu and Armagan)
ReplyDeleteThe news topic is good but the speech of the news represent it slowly it should be faster other speaker also should speak a bit faster but in general it is good.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly I want to appreciate all of my friends. Because all the groups were really creative and made us feel that we are watching native news. However for group one I observed that there are a few pronunciation mistake. for group two the anchorwoman’s speech is fluent but I just couldn’t hear what neslihan was speaking. Because the noise from back was terrible. For group 3 kübra was really successful at anchorwoman job her pronunciation is good. For the fourth group I want to say that I cant exactly understand fatma’s speech. Gülsen’s speech is fluent but Gassuns speech is also unclear because she cries too much while watching I was also about to cry for the 5. group I just want to say ‘WELL DONE ‘ good job my friends. I couldn’t help watching without breathing. Because hande’s speech was soo clear, the visiual effects are really perfect. I can see that they really worked hard on this video So I just thank them for sharing such a good job with us. All in all I want to appreciate all the groups, they really encouraged us for the next week videos
ReplyDeleteGroup 3: Ceyda, Ferda, Kübra
ReplyDeleteThe topic of the news is funny. Timing is really good. However, I think your video could be better if you did not turn the camera to the other side. This can be done with moviemaker and it would be more realistic in this way. Thanks for your efforts...
section 1, group 1 Hatice, Duygu, Armağan.
ReplyDeletethe news topic is good and informing. I liked that way of Armağan's nodding her head while listening to Hatice-the sociologist.
thank u.
Group 3 second video: Gülsen, Fatma, Gassun
ReplyDeleteThe video is good. However, there some mistakes in pronunciation in Fatma's speech. Also, her speech is not fluent enough. Gülsen's speech is good, I think. I cannot say anything but perfect to Gassun because she acts as if she is really crying and I could understand every word of her. Thanks for your efforts...
(Hande Hanife and Üstün)
ReplyDeleteYou are very creative. I liked the topic. A plane crash in Miami...only survivor the pilot Üstün:)I think the pilot speaks naturally, but both the pilot and reporter could have pronounced some words like "especially" better. It is a good video.:) Thanks.
section3 group 3 Ceyda, Ferda, Kübra.
ReplyDeleteYour performances are very good; especially, Ferda's. The speeches of you are very fluent. Ferda is very good at making the UFO experiencer silent. However, you could have found more original topics than UFOs.
Group 3 third video: Üstün, Hande, Hanife
ReplyDeleteThe topic you've chosen is really good. The atmosphere you created is very good and creative. There are some mistakes but but the organization of your video is really good. Thanks for your efforts...
(Group 3: Ceyda Ferda and Kübra)
ReplyDeleteI liked the topic of the video. It is really funny. Your gestures are very realistic.:) If only you had not turned the camera to the other side. Thanks for your efforts.
(Gülşen, Fatma and Gassun)
ReplyDeleteYour video is good. The news speaker could have spoken more fluently. Gülşen is good. I liked Gassun's gestures very much. She acts as a real actress. Thanks :)
group 1: Duygu, Hatice,Armağan
ReplyDeleteı think your video and topic is good. Doctor and speaker speak good but anchorwoman should speak more fluently because there cannot be enough time to speak everytime.
(GROUP 1 hatice duygu armağan)
ReplyDeleteYour topic is good. ı thiink that news speaker should have spoken faster and fluently. there are some pronunciatıon mistakes but generally ıliked your video. thanks for your efforts
group 2: ğülşah, neslihan
ReplyDeletethe people who are back shout loudly so I cannot hear what speaker says and speaker should not look her paper often. Apart from these, the news is good.
(GROUP 2 gülşah and neslihan)
ReplyDeleteı liked your video. manchester fans are really enthusiastic but ı could not hear the speaker. thanks for your performance...
group 3: ceyda, feda, kübra
ReplyDeletefriends, you are raeally perfect. All of you speak fluently and your ufo news is really factual. Congratulations..........
group 4: gülsen, fatma, gassun
ReplyDeletegassun you are making good role. there are small pronounciation mistakes in your speech but generally you are really perfect. thanks four your good performance.
(GROUP 3 kübra ceyda ferda)
ReplyDeleteyour video is really funny.ceyda's speech is effective. also kübra speak as a real news speaker.ı liked speech of ferda and ceyda.thank you girls...
group 5: üstün, hande, hanife
ReplyDeletehi friends; your news is unforgettable. All of you speak fluently but ı think üstün is a bit exited and there are some pronounciation mistake like severely in his speech. Apart from these, ı like your news very much. Congratulations.
(GROUP 4 fatma gülsen gassun)
ReplyDeleteyour topic is real event so it is effective. ıwant to say about fatma's speech. there ate some mistakes for example injure... gülsen spoke in the same intonation. her voice tone did not change.the most important thing ı want to say about this video that gassun is a real actress.ı could not help believing to her. thanks for your efforts...
(GROUP 5 ÜSTÜN HANDE HANİFE)
ReplyDeleteI liked your video.your topic
is differet.hande' speech is clear. but ı could not hear üstün and hanife excellently. thanks friends..........
group1(Hatice, Duygu, Armağan)
ReplyDeleteI think news speaker should have spoken faster.There is nothing visual about the event that the news speaker tells, so this news generally consists of informative speech.
group2(Gülşah-Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteYour news is generally good,butNeslihan should not havetaken her paper with her.Neslihan's speech cannot be understood clearly because of the noise.thanks..
group 3(Fatma, Gassun, Gülsen)
ReplyDeleteFatma should have been more excited because she is talking about a fire.Gassun is good at role playing.Gülsen's speech is clear. thanks..
Group3(Üstün Hande Hanife)
ReplyDeleteApart from some missing details, your video is good.There are some grammatical mistakes in Üstün's speech.thanks...
Good job friends. I think all of the videos are well-prepared in general.I know that all of us spent effort and tried to do our best. Of course, there are some errors and faultiness.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, group one, your topic is different but the news speaker should have spoken more fluently. the speech is rather slow compared to an anchorwoman. Other friends speak quite natural. Their speech suits with their role:)
(Group 1 Hatice,Duygu,Armağan)
ReplyDeleteThe speaker speaks so slowly. I think she should have spoken fluently.Also, she should have used gestures and mimics.However, the topic of the news is good. Thanks for your effort:)
(Group 2 Neslihan and Gülşah)
I think it is a good job girls. However, I had difficuly in hearing the reporter because of the noise of holigans. Thanks...
(Group 3 Gülsen,Fatma,Gassun)
Gassun,you are really successful and also Gülsen speaks very natural.Your topic is good. Good job girls...
(Group 3 Hande,Üstün,Hanife)
Friends your video is very good but at the begining the news Hande says "the plane fell down due to the bad weather conditions".However, the weather is sunny in the video.In addition,Üstün could have spoken fluently.Generaly it is successful.thanks..
group 2, (Gülşah and Neslihan).
ReplyDeleteThe environment you create is so nice. It might be better if Neslihan's paper weren't with her. At some points I cant hear what she says because of the noise.
group 3 (Ferda, Kübra and Ceyda)
ReplyDeleteThis really a nice video. Both Kübra and Ferda speaks clear. I must confess that Ceyda's gestures are so credible. She seems as if she saw UFO really. thanks guys...:))
The last group (hande, üstün and hanife)
hande, you speaks clear and fluent enough. But Üstün seems to be excited so much and this causes to several mistakes. ıt would be better if the speech was more fluent. It is a well-prepared video however.thankss...
(Group 2: Neslihan and Gülşah)
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a really enjoyable video. The news is also good. I like the atmosphere Neslihan and Gülşah created very much.:) The hooligans are really enthusiastic and they seem as if they really were waiting for a big match..:))I like them. Neslihan reflects her emotion well and Gülşah makes her role in a good way.. Thanks for your efforts....
(hatice duygu armağan)
ReplyDeleteyour video is generally good.ı could understand what all you said and meant very clearly. doctor seems a real doctor because of her serious and wise aspect.
(gülşah and neslihan)
ReplyDeletethe anchorwoman speaks well but she does not look like an anchorwoman but she is successful anyway. hooligans are making too much noise. and reporter can be heard hardly. however it increases the credibility of the event of match.
(ceyda kübra ferda)
ReplyDeleteit is a good video because;
1. the plot of the news is interesting.
2. the intonations are mostly correct.
3. the acting of ceyda is very successful.
for neslihan's and gülşah's video
ReplyDeletethe athmosphere in the video is rather good. As a topic, it is a good choice. I liked it. thanks..
for Ceyda Ferda Kübra
Although there are some pronunciation mistakes, the video is very funny.Also, the gestures of the reporter are very good..thanks
for gülsen fatma gassun
the part in which the reporter speaks is too long and a bit boring. Also, she does not speaks naturally. I liked the surviver;)but she makes some pronunciation mistakes. the news speaker is good..thamks
for hande hanife üstün
the news is so realistic. I liked all of the friends. they speak naturally, but üstün has some pronunciation mistakes. thanks
(gülsen, fatma, gassun)
ReplyDeletethe place which is the news studio is very good. there are a few pronounciation mistakes of fatma but they dont distract very much. gulsen is sometimes confused but it is natural because she is reporting.(live) it is normal. and gassun acts very well.
group 1 duyu,hatice and armagan: All of us know this is the first pesentation of this semester.(gazamız mübarek olsun:D:D:D)You have a good prersentation. However,with your mimics and gestures you can make your study more appreciatable.Your pronunciation is fine and understandable but you need to improve it, too. Nevetheless, thanks for your struggle.=)
ReplyDeletegroup 1 video 2 neslihan and gülşah: First of all, you have a good supporter of manchester including me:D:D Both of our friends talk in a good way. However, as we have made so much noise, people may have difficulty in hearing Neslihan.Despite all of these, you have a good study with its realistic atmosphere=)
ReplyDeletegroup 2 video 3 ceyda, ferda and kübra: As my other friends, you have a good video,too. However, the pronunciation of the words is a bit problematic. You can focus on pronunciation. Thanks for your effort:)
group 2 video 4 gülsen fatma and gassun: Fistly, Gassun has a good talent in acting:) I was about to cry,too.=) Gülsen could use her face and hands much more so as to show her feelings. Fatma is a bit senseless while speaking. She may add more emotion to her speech. Thanks anyway friends:)
group 2 video 5: Friends you have a really fun video. The artifical atmosphere is really smart:D:D It needs intelligence:D:D However, Üstün should make some attention to his grammar and pronunciation. The other friends also need to practice pronunciation. Nevertheless, thanks for your struggle.:)
(group 1 Hatice,Duygu and Armağan
ReplyDeleteI think, the anchorwoman should speak fluently. Also, she should use gestures. The speech between doctor and speaker is very good. I mean, it is very natural. thanks.
(group 2 Gülşah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteThe video is generally good. The anchorwoman speaks well. The speaker cannot be heard easily because of the noise. The noise should not be dominant in the video. thanks.
(Group 1) frieds, your video is good in general. Your subject is interesting and characters act good. You speak understandably.However, the anchorwoman seems a bit anxious. good luck
ReplyDelete(Group 2) my creative friends, your video is enjoyable.Both of you perform well, but I cannot hear much of neslihan'speech because of noise. Also, She should have not looked at her paper so often.Good luck. Esra Çınar.
ReplyDelete(group 3 Gülsen, Fatma and Gassun)
ReplyDeleteI think, the anchorwoman should speak fluently. Gülsen speaks naturally. Gassun’s speech is understandable. I liked the video very much. Thanks.
(group 3 Hande, Hanife and Üstün)
ReplyDeleteThe video is very good. It is enjoyable. The speeches of all of them are clear. Thanks.
(Group 3 video 1) my friends, your video is good. you, especially anchorwoman, perform well.Her gestures and intonation are good.Good luck. esra ç.
ReplyDelete(Group 3 video2) friends, you, especially gassun, acts well. Your pronouncation is good.Fatma uses her hands so much and seems a bit excited.In general, it is a good video. Good luck. Esra Ç.
ReplyDelete(Group 3 video 3) congratulations friends :). Your video is good in general. Your speeches are good, also. Connection between the beginning ( real scene) and the rest parts is good. I like it most.Good luck. Esra Ç.
ReplyDelete(group 1 hatice duygu and armağan)
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I can say that your topic is interesting. I liked it.But, the news speaker should have spoken more fluently and used gestures.The reporter's pronunciation is good.Also the doctor mispronounced the words 'occur' and 'condition'.
(group 2 gülşah and neslihan)
Their pronunciations and the atmosphere are really good although there is too much noise. the news speaker should have spoken by looking at the camera also the reporter could speak without the paper.
(group 3 ceyda ferda and kübra)
kübra speaks well her pronunciation is good. Each of them spoke fluently especially ceyda's gestures is good. Also your ufo is well done:)
(group 3 gülsen fatma and gassun)
I think fatma's gestures is realy interesting:)Her pronunciation could be much better.Also gassun acted well.Gassun and gülsen spoke fluently but gülsen could use a microphone I think:)Generally, I think all of the videos are well done. Thanks for your effort and sharing your videos.( Hanife Sertiç)
I like duygu's seriousness and armağan's style of speaking.however, duygu should have spoken faster.
ReplyDeletebeing a presentor suits gülşah very well. she speaks good. both neslihan and gülşah reflect the atmosphere successfully.however, neslihan's speaking sometimes cannot be understood because of the hooligans. ıt is a good video.I like their intonations.
ın the last video, I like presentor's manners and accent( as if it belonged to a certain area. ver much.üstün, you shoul be more careful with your pronunciation.the plot and atmosphere is good.
gassun uses her gestures very often,which is not suitable for a presentator.
all the videos and subjects are good.however,pronunciations are not very good.
(group 2 Gulsah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteanchorwoman speaks fluently but ı couldn't understand speaker because of noise. However, speech and topic is good.
(group 3 Ceyda, Ferda and Kubra)
ReplyDeleteTopic is good. Video is creative especially ufo scene is good. All of them speak fluently and also ceyda use her gestures in a good way.
(group 3 Gülsen, Fatma, and Gassun)
ReplyDeleteTopic of the news is good. Fatma makes some mistakes while talking but speech is fluent. Gülsen talks also fluently. Finally gassun you are acting well ı enjoyed too much.
(group 3 Hande, Hanife and Ustün)
ReplyDeleteIt is really good and creative news. I enjoyed. Speechs are fluent. Thanks for efforts for videos
group 1(hatice,duygu,armağan)
ReplyDeleteI think the speaker speaks slowly also in the same intonation. Additionally, the other two friends make a few pronounciation mistakes but generally, it is a good video:)
group 2(gülşah,neslihan)
The mimics of the speaker are good. But Neslihan pronounced the word 'occur' wrongly.Also, I cant understand most of Neslihan's words because of the noise. However it is good job..
group 3(ceyda,kübra and ferda)
Although there are some pronounciation mistakes, the video is very good. Especially, I liked Ceyda's gestures very much..
group 4(hande, hanife and üstün)
Visual effects are perfect. Hanife makes some errors and there are unnecessary pauses during her speech and Üstün also makes pronounciation mistakes. But generally it is a very good video and like a real one.Congratulations...
FATMA FAKIOĞLU
The first video: Hatice, Duygu and Armağan: the content of the video is appropriate for news and discussion programs. I liked the way they presented. You did a good job. Thanks for your effort :))
ReplyDeleteThe second video: Gülşah and Neslihan: The content is good, you are successful but I could not catch some parts because of the hooligans (especially Meryem).
The third video: Ayşegül ,Esra and Zehra: I liked their video. Congrugulations..
The fourth video: Aylin and Yasemin: you seem very relaxed. Your speaking style is very effective. You pay attention to your pronunciation and intonation. Good job :))
The fifth video: Ceyda,Ferda and Kübra: You were creative and spoke in a good way friends. Your topic was enjoyable thanks to your efforts.
The sixth video: Gülşen, Fatma and Gassun: It is a good video I could not catch any mistakes.
I liked their way of speaking and acting especially Gassun’s .Good luck...
The seventh video: Hatice ,Hanife and Üstün: It is a very creative video I liked it. Their pronunciations are good they are fluent. Also, laughed at the name Abraham very much it is really very creative. Briefly, I like your video very much :) Good luck...
(Group 2 Ayşegül, Esra, Zehra). Friends,topic of your video is interesting. You, especially Ayşegül, speak well but it is a bit hard to hear you due to noise. There are some pronunciation mistakes; however, it was a good video. Also, I like your microphone and backing :D. Good luck.
ReplyDelete(Group 2 Ayşegül, Esra, Zehra) The video is generally good but there are some mistakes in pronunciation. Actually, I had difficulty in hearing Ayşegül and Esra. Anyway, thanks for your efforts...
ReplyDeleteI think first video ( duygu, armağan, hatice) is generally good. However,duygu should have spoken more fluently. Also, hatice pronounces the word "occur" wrongly. As for armağan, she speaks well and she behaves like a reporter.
ReplyDeleteAs it comes to the second video( gülşah, nesihan)they create a good atmosphere for their video. However, there is much noise made by holigans. both gülşah and neslihan speaks fluently. lastly, ı liked topics of both videos. Thanks to both group.
(Aylin and Yasemin)
ReplyDeleteThere are too many mistakes in pronunciation such as nuclear, central, measurement and so on but the video is good. Thanks for your efforts...
( Group 2 yasemin , aylin) good video. Your topic is serious. In some parts, you get exited and mispronounce some words. After all, it is good. Good Luck.
ReplyDelete(group 1 hatice armağan duygu)
ReplyDeletein this project we have to know that speakers should use charming words and speak in a clear way.when l wacthed that video l noticed there is no difference from the original news which we have watched from Tv.so it can be said it is a wonderful study.they used necessary words and their topic is interesting.l conratulate them on preaparing that presentation.l watched it with pleasure.
(group 2 Gulsah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeletel have learnt from that people can share their happiness with the news.this interesting subject is not half bad :) yes,there are fans who are making noise but criticizing this situation is funny coz they cannot reflect their emotions without that noise :)
(group 1 Hatice, Duygu and Armağan)
ReplyDeleteTo be honest, the anchor talked too long at the beginnig. I thougt she would end the video on her own. The topic of the video is good by the way. Sleepwalking is an interesting problem making me watch the news :) Thanks for your study!
(group 1 Gülşah & Neslihan) The anchor was good at presenting the news. And the connection between the anchor and announcer was well done. However, I could not understand what the announcer said because of the hooligans :). By the way, the ambiance was perfect. Thank you...
ReplyDelete(group 1 Ceylan & Mehmet)
ReplyDeleteThe topic of the video was an upsetting event. Therefore the anchors were good at presenting for they could give the sense of this hearthbreaking event. Thank you...
(group 2 Ayşegül, Esra & Zehra)
ReplyDeleteThe topic was effective for me. It is a growing problem for people especially in Mersin. By means of this kind of news programs people may gain consciousness for the help of ending pollution. The video is well prepared. Background music was perfect, also.:) thank you...
Group 1 (Hatice, Duygu and Armagan)
ReplyDeleteI have never seen such a narrator, she presents her news like spinning a yarn.:) She should be much more excited and should explain the news much more lively. I cannot see any gestures or intonation while she is speaking. The topic of the news that is going to be presented is good enough; however, there was nothing capturing my interest. Delivery girl (2. friend) speaks good, actions well and her intonation and emotion towards her subject is good. The only thing is she speaks so little. Doctor (3.friend) was also good at both her intonation and liveliness.
Group 2 (Gülsah and Neslihan)
The narrator speaks lively, but she has a couple of pronunciation mistakes. Apart from that everything is as it should be what is in the news. Neslihan’s gestures and speak level and her speak tone is good. She gives the situation well enough. But i ve a question for u girls; fans are making cheering like Turkish fans :D “Lay lay laay???” :D cheer leader there is so good at her job !! :D
Group 3 (Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra)
Breaking news is a different kind of news program. There should be an emergency situation or last-minute happening I think. The narrator should be more excited if it is a breaking news. Three of you are good at pronounciaton and action. Good job.
Group 4 (Aylin and Yasemin)
Girls, I can hardly hear your voices! The atmosphere of your studio is good! I like it. You two are good at your speakings. It is like a real program. Maybe if u look to the camera while explaining your subject, that can be much more effective fort he audience.
Group 5( Kübra, Ferda and Ceyda)
Kübra you should be an anchorGIRL your gestures your intonation is good my friend. And the part that u show us the UFO is so creative! Topic is classic but interesting. Ceyda’s gestures are soo brilliant (they picked your apples??!! ) Ferda is also good like Ceyda. It s a good video for news subject girls. Thanks for your effort.
Group 6 (Gülsen, Fatma and Gassun)
Fatma waow is that u? U can be a good narrator like Kübra I like ur intonation and liveliness and gestures while giving audience the subject. Gülsen is the same like Fatma. She gives as it is in the news program. Do not take offence but Gassun’s performance is really deserves applause! There is nothing much more to tell except a couple of mispronunciations. And lastly, your passing the word with each other is also good.
Congrats girls!
Group 7( Hande, Üstün and Hanife)
Hande, gives the emotion the subject! Just slow, a little sad good job. And the connection minutes are so good (can u hear me izaura? ) I wish Mersin coast can be Miami Coast
Üstün, Abraham El-Mansur!! Good job friends. But I had difficulty in hearing your voices.!
Topic is fascinating, and the plane scene in the video is effective! Congrats.
(group 2 Aylin & Yasemin)
ReplyDeleteThe topic is important for people beacause people must do something to prevent global warming. Nuclear energy has lots of negative effects on global warming. Therfore, discussing this topic is excellent for me... Thank you.
(group 3 Kübra, ferda & Ceyda)
ReplyDeleteIt was an interesting topic. The anchor was good at connecting the announcer to the program. Ceyda was also well performing her part.:) She was persuasive... Thank you for your study...
group 3 Ferda,Ceyda & Kübra
ReplyDeleteI wonder how you did that view of UFO :D you were so creative.All of you ,especially Ceyda, were performing her role so well. congratulations! :D
(group 3 Gülsen, Fatma & Gassun)
ReplyDeleteI thought Fatma was really in a news studio :).
She was good. Gülsen was also good as a announcer. Gassun was the perfect one. She was also very persuasive :). thank you...
(group 3 Fatma, Hanife & Üstün)
ReplyDeleteHande was again speaking so fluently. She was a good anchor. The announcer, Hanife was also good. Üstün as the only rescued person was performing good. And the ambiance was choosen well. However, I think the cameraman was confused :). He/she did not show us the whole plane raised there as a monument... :):):)
ceyda ferda kübra your video is really good one especially ceyda made her role very well all of the sentences are clear to understand the topic is good and interesting congratulations friends
ReplyDeletegroup 3 Gülsen, Fatma & Gassun
ReplyDeleteThat was really like a real news program girls. Well done. Gassun would nearly make me cry. You were so convincing :D
üstün hande hanife the subject of your video choosen well miami and dressing winter clothes are another enjoying event but hande your voice might be louder congratulations friends
ReplyDeletegülsen fatma gassun you were good at this job gassun you acted like an actrees but you should have put some water drops for more convincing congratulations
ReplyDeletegroup3 Üstün, Hande, Hanife.
ReplyDeleteTHe most creative one was this :D Hande'S accent was a bit like Russians at first :) Üstün you should pay attention to some words' usage. Hanife, you could have spoken in an excited way baby :) congratulations.
Hatice, Duygu and Armagan your video is good but it is very dull it is not interesting to arouse smbs interest
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Gulsah and Neslihan your video is enjoying hooligans are perfect
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Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra the topic of your video is good one i liked it the entering of the video is also noticing
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(mehmet and ceylan)
ReplyDeleteyour video could have been better in terms of several things. for example, you did some grammatical mistakes. tenses confused. apart from that your speeches were OK. however, why did the woman not look at the anchorman? it was a bit distracting.
group( hatice, duygu armagan)
ReplyDeletethe topic is interesting an creative. the story gets all the attantion:)
group gulsah and neslihan
gulsah speaks well:) and conversation happens spontanously as it is supposed to be:) and holigans are hilarous:)
group mehmet and ceylan
the topic is interesting but they are supposed to speak faster.
GROUP ESRA AND ZEHRA
the topic is important but when they talk they do not put any emotion. they are supposed to show their sadness.
GROUP AYLIN AN YASEMIN
the video is different than other and it is good:)
GROUP CEYDA, FERDA AND KUBRA
video is excellent:) ceyda you are the best innocent villager who saw UFO:)
GROUP GULSEN, FATMA AND GASSUN
the group is perfect a specially gassun:) do you continue theatre course?:) i think you should
GROUP USTUN, HANIFE AND HANDE
you guys are creative and i like the turkish plane in miami:) ustun never gives up his little emrah face:)
Group 1 (Hatice, Duygu and Armagan)
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but video is beginning in the middle of the news, that is interesting :)
(Gülsah and Neslihan)
holigans are so excited :)they did their job well. :) the narrator has some pronunciation mistakes and should be more lively while presenting the news.
(mehmet and ceylan)
your video should be better. I think you didn't care this project so much this time. ceylan's speech is too long. their speech are not coresponding. I think next time you will prepare better.
Group 2 (Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra)
The narrator should be more excited because it is a breaking news. they did good job.they are good at pronounciaton and action. I love the music at the background but there is too much noise.
(Aylin and Yasemin)
this video is different because it is a discussion program. I liked yasemin's talking. she was talking so fluent.good job.
Group 3( Kübra, Ferda and Ceyda)
kübra you are so good at presenting news. ceyda is also persuasive and ferda is very good. I liked ufo scene. good job girls! :)
(Fatma,Gülsen and Gassun)
fatma should act sad because of the news but she is too serious. I liked gülsen's performance because she talks nervously it is suitable for this news. gassun you are perfect! you are acting so beliviable! good job!
(Üstün,Hande and Hanife)
you are excellent! I liked your job! you are so creative! I congratulate all of you!
(group 1 Mehmet and Ceylan)
ReplyDeleteIn general, I like the video. Their speeches are clear and natural. However, the video can be organized beter. thanks.
(group 2 Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra)
ReplyDeleteThe video is well-organized. However, their speeches cannot be heard easily because of the noise. I like it very much. thanks.
(group 2 Aylin and Yasemin)
ReplyDeleteThe speech between them is good. I like the video. thanks.
GROUP 1
ReplyDelete*Hatice-Duygu-Armagan
First reporter may have spoken faster. Her voice sounds as if she is telling a story news.
Second reporter's attitude and voice tone is very good but she speaks less than the others.
For doctor, I can say that she is very good.
Apart from all these comments, your video is good and succesful. Also, the topic of the news is very inviting. Congratulations.
*Gulsah-Neslihan
First reporter does't look at the camera. It is a little bit disturbing. Second reporter's voice cannot be heard. However, video is enjoyful. I laughed when I watched the hooligans. Congratulations.
*Mehmet-Ceylan
There isn't an appropriate eye contact between the camera and the reporters. Also, their voice tones are not appealing. But still you make a good video. Congratulations.
GROUP 2
*Aysegul-Esra-Zehra
The entrance to the video is good and creative but, in my opinion, your turkish names aren't appropriate for this video. The sound coming from back is disturbing. However, your video is good and there is an effort that you made for it. That's why congratulations.
*Aylin-Yasemin
It is so hard to hear what you have talked but you are very good. Congratulations.
GROUP 3
*Ceyda-Ferda-Kubra
Kubra is born to deliver the news. Ceyda is very good at acting. Ferda speaks less than others but she is good at reporting. Also, your ufo ship is amazing, so creative.
Congratulations.
*Gulsen-Fatma-Gassun
Gassun is very talented in acting. Fatma's and Gulsen's voices are good but Fatma's voice could be more appropriate fot this news. There are some pronunciation mistakes. Still, you are very good. Congratulations.
*Hande-Hanife-Ustun
Hande, what can be said about you? you are perfect and excellent, so nature and so good. Ustun is good bu could be better. Hanife doesn't speak much that's why I cannot make honest comment for her. Still, you are very very good. Huge Congratulations.
( Group 1 video 3 mehmet-ceylan). Friends, your video is not bad, but you should have paid more attention. Both of you seem restless and excited. Also,while asking a question and answering it, you should look at each other, not camera. Good luck.
ReplyDelete(Group 1 first video Hatice-Duygu-Armağan)
ReplyDeleteTopic of the video is attractive. Duygu is speaking understandable. Armağan and Hatice are more relax, and I think it is good. Generally, video is good and friends are successful..
Group 1 second video Gülşah-Neslihan)
ReplyDeleteThe video is a bit short. Also, I could not hear Neslihan clearly because of too much noise. However, the atmospher is very good.
(Group 1 third video Mehmet-Ceylan)
ReplyDeleteCeylan and Mehmet are speaking understandable; however, while they are speaking, they should look at each other. Generally, their video is good..
(Group 2 - First video Ayşegül-Esra-Zehra)
ReplyDeleteTopic of the video is attractive and friends are really good. They seem cool. I liked this video and I watched it appreciatelly..
(Group 2- Second video Yasemin-Aylin)
ReplyDeleteTopic of your video is good, but I think conversations are a bit boring. They are sometimes excited.
(Group 3 first video Ceyda-Kübra-Ferda)
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video. Your topic is interesting. The anchorwoman speaks and acts well.Conguratilations:D.
(Group 3-second video Gassun-Fatma-Gülşen)
ReplyDeleteFriends, Your video is good in general. There are some pronunciation mistakes. However, you act well. Good luck..
(Group 3-Third video Üstün-Hanife-Hande)
ReplyDeleteFriends, your video is enjoyable and the subject is interesting. It is like a real interview. I like the beginning of the video most. Good luck..
(hatice duygu armağan)
ReplyDeletethere is nothig wrong with your video apart from some some pronunciation mistakes and duygu's talking slow.as a speaker you should have talked faster because you know time is limited in such programmes.so talking fast is important.
(Mehmet and ceylan)
Your video is good so there isnt much to say about it: it is good.
(Zehra esra and Ayşegül)
There are so many pronunciation mistakes and additionally Zehra makes only a very short opening speech.ıf she were in the discussion making some comments and asking questions it could have been beter.
(Neslihan and Gülşah)
there are some comments on the noice that is made during Neslihan’s speech. But i dont agree with them.byou know (if you watch such sport reports) speakers shout to make their voice heard. So these noices maket he report like a real one. Good job girls!!
(Fatma,gülsaen and gassun)
Fatma seems like a real speaker but there are some mistakes in pronunciation. The other were also good at their roles.
(Ceyda ferda and Kübra)
Your video is good.you all acted and talk well.well done!
(hande Hanife and üstün)
Your video is also good. I enjoyed watching it!! There are some simple pronunciation mistakes but your creativity hides them..
mehmet and zehra:
ReplyDeletesorryy your video is not as serious as it should be in news. both of you( especially mehmet) smile from time to time.):)also it is long I think,and ceylan,while speaking you should have looked at mehmet:)but it is not bad it is ok;)
ayşegül zehra and esra:
I like your subject. there are some minor pronunciation mistakes. also the sound that comes from outside is disturbing,but it is still a good video.
yasemin and aylin:
you are serious,which is good.however,both of you mispronunced some words. for example: foreign and central.it is not bad:)
mehmet and ceylan
ReplyDeleteyour video is generally good but you should have paid more attention. ı think it is too long. it could be better. thanks for your efforts.
mehmet and ceylan,
ReplyDeleteI liked your video as it was good. Your pronounciaitons were good, too. However, your video is too long. thank u.
ayşegül, esra, zehra;
girls, your video was good; however, the Zehra's and Esra's speeches were not very fluent and some of the words they used were pronounced wrongly. thank u.
aylin and yasemin,
ReplyDeletei liked your video because your pronounciation were good. Also, your environment was very relaxing.:)However, Aylin shoul have acted like a real news speaker because she seems as if she is sleepy. thank u.
hatice, duygu and armağan:
ReplyDeleteYour video is suitable for a news programme. their pronunciation was good but duygu made some grammatical mistakes but not critical ones. A good video, thanks.
gülşah and neslihan:
I loved your video:) but I hardly listened to neslihan coz of the hooligans:) your video was succesful.
mehmet and ceylan:
your video is a bit long. both of them made some mistakes both grammatical and pronuncation. however, the topic is well-chosen it is not an ordinary one. thanks for the video.
ayşegül, esra and zehra:
your video is well organized but the noise makes it difficult to understand what they are saying. ayşegül made some pronunciation mistakes. the video is good thanks,
ceyda, ferda and kübra
your topic is up to date. it is a bit theatrical which is good and this made your video natural. thanks for your share,
gülsen, fatma and gassun:
the video is generally good. gülsen made some mistakes while talking. the first person's voice was reverberating and this made her speech difficult to understand. thanks for the video,
hande, üstün and hanife:
the plane crahs is very effective:) but the plane in front of which you made your speech is turkish:) a good video with limited sources:) congratulations..:))
Mehmet and Ceylan: Your video is actually good but it is long ı think. In addition, ceylan doesn't have eye contact with mehmet.
ReplyDeleteesra,zehra, and ayşegül:ın the video,esra and ayşegül speak longer than zehra. And, there is much noise. your video is visually very good because you create the suitable atmosphere for this news. and all of your pronunciation is generally good.
yasemin and aylin:ı cant hear your voice well. and yasemin makes some pronunciation mistakes in some words such as "fear". despite these, your video is generally good and your topic is well-chosen.
1st video by Hatice, Duygu and Armagan.Generally it is a good one. The pronounciation is well and the subject is interesting.
ReplyDeletethe second video by Gulsah and Neslihan
It was really enjoyable and realistic. It was very good.
3rd video by Esra, Ayşe and Zehra
ReplyDeleteIt is generally good but sometimes it was hard for me to understand because there were too much noise. The pronounciation is well and the subjects is interesting
1st group(Hatice,Duygu and Armağan) It is really a good video and the topic is interesting. Armağan has spoken well but I think, Duygu should have spoken faster. Hatice has spoken well and natural despite the wrong pronounciation of the word "occur". I liked the video.
ReplyDeleteThe second group(Gülşah and Neslihan)
The video is not very successfull. I think it would be better. Because Neslihan's voice cannot be heard and Gülşah is not nature. Thank you!
1st group:(Duygu,Hatice,Armağan)the video and its topic were good. In addition,the introduction to the news was good.Yet,Duygu could speak a bit more quicker to give the emotion of the event.She could have changed the pitch of her voice.Hatice pronounced the word "occur" wrongly.Armağan w3as good she performed her role well.Generally it was a good video congraculations friends:)
ReplyDelete1st group 1st video :(Duygu,Hatice,Armağan)the video and its topic were good. In addition,the introduction to the news was good.Yet,Duygu could speak a bit more quicker to give the emotion of the event.She could have changed the pitch of her voice.Hatice pronounced the word "occur" wrongly.Armağan was good she performed her role well.Generally it was a good video congraculations friends:)
ReplyDelete2nd video:( Gülşah,Neslihan): The video’s topic is good .However, the atmosphere is not. I could not get neslihan’s voice because there was too much noise. Gülşah could have changed the tone of her voice.She should have given the emotion more.thank you!
ReplyDelete3rd video:( Ceylan,Mehmet)Your video was a good one;yet,there were some points that you should take into consideration.Firstly, you had no eye contact at the beginning of the video.Mehmet talked as if he read.He should have paid attention to the emotio. Both of you smiled even though your programme was a serious one.Ceylan's gestures were good and Mehmet was better at the end of the programme.:)
ReplyDeleteGroup2: 1st video(Ayşegül,Zehra,Esra)Zehra talked too quick.She should have paid attention to the pauses.Esra had some pronounciation mistakes such as doctor,environment. She paused a lot before asking questions.Ayşegül was good. your video was good generally,you I liked the introduction and its conclusion.well done friends!:)
ReplyDeleteGroup2:2nd video:(Aylin,Yasemin) Your video was a good one in addition to its topic. Yet, the introduction to your news programme was not a good one. In some places, Yasemin pronounced words such as foreigner,nuclear,and energy wrongly.Both of you should have tried to change the pitches of your voice in some sentences. thank you:)
ReplyDelete(Duygu, Hatice, Armağan) The topic is good and creative. The subject of the conversation is fluent and friends have acted very good. Especially, I liked the way Hatice spoke and acted. It is convincing. However, I guess Duygu may have spoken a bit faster to make her conversation more fluent to follow.
ReplyDelete(Gülşah and Neslihan)
Their topic is also good and they both acted in a convincing way. They both speak very good and they both look like anchorwoman. However, I guess it would be beter if the holligans had screamed at a lower noise as it makes it hard to follow Neslihan easily. Holligans take the attention of listeners.
(Mehmet and Ceylan)
The video and topic is good generally. And they speak well. It s certain that they have paid attention to their speech and topic before. However, I think they should also have paid attention to the way they acted. All in all, we ll be english teachers, not actresses. Therefore, it s good.
(Yasemin and Aylin)
Their subject and speech is very good. However, it can be understood that they were a bit excited while recording the video =). However, it s good and convincing. Congratulations…
(Hande, Hanife and Üstün)
Their video record is not only successful but also funny. I especially like the Turkish flag that is seen on the plane =) Congratulations =)
(Gülsen, Fatma and Gassun)
I liked the video it is really successful. They have all acted in a convincing way and spoke naturally. There arre some pronouncation mistakes but they are not so much to bother.
(Ceyda, Ferda, Kübra)
They spoke naturally accept for some grammatical mistakes. They are convincing and the topic is also funny. The video is also funny too. Good job.
(Ayşegül, Esra, Zehra)
The video is good. Although, there are some pronouncation problems, our friends are successful generally. However, it would be beter if they spoke in a louder voice.
Melike Gazioğlu
Group3:(Ceyda,Ferda, Kübra)It was an intresting video.The anchorman relayed the event well. She paid attention to the stressing well to an extent .ferda asked questions in an excitedly way.She tried to give the emotion,which is a good point for her.Yet, Kübra should pay attention to the pitch of her voice a bit more in order to give the emotion of the event.well done friends:)
ReplyDeleteGroup3(2nd video)(Gülsen, Fatma, Gassun)It was a good video. I liked it. Gülşen's pitch was good. However, there were some mistakes related to the pronounciation of the words.Gassun tried to give the emotion well.thank you.
ReplyDeleteGroup3:(3rd video)(Hande, Hanife,Üstün) Hande's speech was good.Hanife should have changed the pitch of her voice.Üstün could relay the event more emotionally.there were some grammar mistakes related to the structure of the sentences and some pronounciation mistakes such as building,air,swim etc. Yet,it was a good one.tHANK YOU:)
ReplyDeletegroup1(Gulsah and Neslihan)
ReplyDeletecongratulations girls!!! it is a really good and natural video...
you are really creative. flow of the videos are also good. and voices are understood clearly.. well done!!!!!
ReplyDeletegroup1(Mehmet and Ceylan)
ReplyDeleteyour topic is interesting and strange... ı cant hear any pronunciation mistakes. good work. go on so ;)
group2(Ayşegül, Esra and Zehra)
ReplyDeleteyou have underlined an environmental issue. this is good of you.also, your speeches are clear. well done girls!!!!!
group2(Aylin and Yasemin)
ReplyDeletethere are no mistakes in your speeches. you have made a good fluent video.congratulations
group3(Ceyda, Ferda and Kübra)
ReplyDeleteyour so imaginitive and creative. well done!!!your pronunciation is good...
this is the most creative video. you show your feelings well. congratulations!!!
ReplyDeletegroup3(Gülsen, Fatma, and Gassun)
ReplyDeletethis is the most creative video. you show your feelings well. congratulations!!!
group3(Hande, Hanife and Üstün)
ReplyDeletetopic and scene are excellent. effect of bbc adds a real atmosphere to your video.. well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For Hatice Duygu and Armağan; I want to say that it is a successful job. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteIn Gülşah and Neslihan's video; there is a noise problem I think. I cannot hear and understand well what you are speaking(Neslihan) because of the audience behind. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteFor Mehmet and Ceylan; you are generally good, but you are a bit tense while speaking. This may be due to the excitement:)
ReplyDeleteTo Ayşegül, Zehra and Esra; Your video is successful, but there is a little noise, but this not a big problem. What you are speaking can be understood. Congratulations:)
ReplyDeleteTo Aylin and Yasemin I want to say that you sould have spoken more loudly.
ReplyDeleteFor Ceyda, Ferda and Kübra, it is successful. There is not a problem. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteTo Üstün, Hande, Hanife; it is a creative subject. You are successful. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteI want to speak about Gülşen, Fatma, Gassun's video. You chose a good topic. Your job is successful.Well done...:)
ReplyDelete3th group(ceylan and mehmet)
ReplyDeleteIt would have been better if Ceylan has looked at mehmet. Mehmet is not natural. He cannot give the emotion that he is surprised. He laughes at the begining of the video looking towards somewhere behind the camera. Ceylan's mimics and gestures are very successful. The topic is interesting, so I liked it. Thank you!
4th group(zehra, ayşegül, esra)
ReplyDeleteThe video is generally good but these are some points about which the girls should have been more careful. For example, Zehra speaks too much shorter than Esra and Ayşegül, and our friends' speeces cannot be heard. Esra makes some pronounciation mistakes but generally the three of the girls are natural and they speak clearly. Thanks!
5th group(Yasemin and Aylin)
ReplyDeleteSorry but the video is a bit boring. The introduction of the video is like a presentation. Generally our friends speak clearly and understandable but Yasemin makes some pronounciation mistakes, such as "energy". The girls are really natural. Thank you!
6th group(Ceyda, Ferda and Kübra)
ReplyDeleteI liked the video. It is enjoyful espacially the lsat part of the video. Our friends speak well espacially Ceyda(anchorwoman) speaks and acts very well. However, Ceyda pronounces some words, such as "listen","experience" wrongly. In addition, it would have been beter if they have not record the video in the same room or if they could have hidden it. Thanks friends!
7th group(Gülşen, Fatma and Gassun)
ReplyDeleteThe video is generally successful. The place is very good. The girls are very serious and it makes the video more natural. Fatma uses her hands too much as an anchorwoman. It is distracting. In addition, she makes some pronounciation mistakes. Gülşen speaks really well as if she is a real announcer. Gassun is like an actress. I was going to cry with her:) I lked her performance. Thanks friends!
8th group(Üstün, Hande and Hanife)
ReplyDeleteThe friends are really creative. The anchorwoman is speaks very well. I liked it. There were some grammatical and pronounciation mistakes of Üstün and announcer. I liked the video. Thank you friends!
memet&ceylan
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, there are some gramatical mistakes but the other thing I want to emphasize is your eye-contact. There isnt an eye-contact.And I dont think that the emotions are given well. Thanks anyway..
ayşegül,zehra & esra
thanks for your efforts. You generally speak clearly. I like your video, environment and also the topic:)
yasemin and aylin.
Aylin, u could be better I think. You could behave as an anchorwoman. Except several p.mistakes, it is a good video. But your topic is a bit boring Thanks girl..
ceylan and mehmet..your prononciation and your topic are good, but you could be more natural and ceylan should have looked at mehmet while she is talking. ..thanks
ReplyDeletein miami demissin arkadasım arkanda uçagın ustunde turk bayragı war!!
ReplyDeleteyou said that miami but turkey's flag is on plane!!
ReplyDeletetopic of group 2'video 2 is very good but the woman who is in right has amateur behavior.although topic was presented well!!
ReplyDeletefor zehra esra and ayşegül
ReplyDeletecongratulations! ı liked the video very much. also,it is a good and important topic. thanks for efforts
for yasemin and aylin
the environment is relaxing and the topic is a serious one but I think aylin could have been more natural..thanks
1st group
ReplyDeleteı think Duygu's speech is a bit long. However, it is fluent.Hatice and Armağan u are perfect in terms of pronounciation, mimics, etc. Thanks for your efforts! =)
2nd Group
Gülşah and Nesli both of your speechs are fluent. the atmosphere that you created is very good. It becomes difficult to hear nesli because of the hooligns. However, they are so sweet:)
3rd Group
There isn't any considerable mistake in your speech. However, ı think you should have been more natural. Also, you should have look to each other while speeking. generally, ıt is good. Thanks :)
ceylan and mehmet
ReplyDeleteit's good.however, there isnt eyecontact. there isnt any considerable mistake in your speech.thanks!
duygu hatice armagan
ReplyDeleteyour video is generally good. however, duygu's speech is a bit long.it is enjoyable.thanks
gassun's group
ReplyDeletethis video is generally goodm but you have pronunciation mistake. thanks
zehra and aysegül
ReplyDeleteyour video is good. you should have been neutral.thanks
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ReplyDeleteHatice, Duygu and Armagan
ReplyDeleteFluency is crucial thing for speakers I think Hatice and Duygu should focus on this issue